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by KogasAngel

person JBella
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me that within the next few chapters, people are going to go from "Sesshomaru, that bastard" to "Kagome, what a bitch". I know I, myself, am already starting to feel sorry for him. And what a development with Inuyasha! Great way to keep him in the story. Update soon!!!
person PJ
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update!!! I do have a question about this part

“Kagome, if you had mated with him, my scent would have been replaced with his. When a male spreads his seed, the female is marked with his scent and the male will know if she has been unfaithful to him if her scent changes.

How come Sessy couldn't tell before all this happened that she didn't cheat on him? If he has such a good nose he should have known. And he should have known that wolk b*tch was cheating on him. What did he have a cold or something? I am glad Kagome and Inuyasha have got things 'square' but was he really mis-informed or did he lie to her so he would have a chance to get back at his family? I hope he didn't I would like for them to be friends and have him be "Uncle Inu" he is a hanyou so he would have alot in common with Kagome's little pup. I hope Kagome takes him to see her puppy. And I just know Sessy is going to have them followed and stuff which will make Kagome angry. He will need to back off.

I don't think you are making Sessy into the back guy he is just very arrogant like his father and was raised that he is "better" look at what he said to those at the meeting... that she should learn to respect her 'betters' yep "stuck up" is what he is and he needs to be humbled a bit so does his father. They can't say that Sessy could give the pup things Kagome can't except for knowledge about beging a inuyoukai or hanyou but Inuyasha could do that now that Kagome and he are talking again.... so Kagome doesn't really need Sessy.

And I think that was low of Sessy to pull her out of the meeting like that and try to seduce her... he needs to learn to treat her better and like an equal she is not that 19yr old silly girl anymore.

Update soon or when you can I know you have a bit going on right now in real life.
person Lea
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! u made my day!
person amoraluv
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why must u torcher me with these short episodes u call chapters
I NEED MORE!!!!!

:-)

Please continue, this is a wonderful story
person cock_roach_elle
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew... You got me worried there. I thought Kagome going to melt like a butter to Sesshoumaru.

Yeah!!! Go Kagome, kick some of Sesshoumaru ego a thing or two. This is getting a little thrilling. I can't wait to read the next chapter of this story.
person jadefeather
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent story! i can't wait for the next installment. i've already read it twice now- it's that good!
person angelruin666
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantadtic. Its like nothing that I have read before. It's really unique and that's why I like it. It brings to life something that most authors don't see. This story truly deserves 5 stars.
person lost child
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awe, that is so...what's the word...beautiful. I can hardly wait for Sess and Kag to get together. I can tell Sesshoumaru really wants to be part of his son's life and is truely sorry for the way things went. I hope Kagome can forgive him and soon.
person Shadow Girl
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting for this update and all I can say about it is...
Another update? Pretty please? *Gives you the puppy eyes*
^_~

Shadow Girl
person P
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the heck are you talking about? I LOVE Sesshoumaru and Kagome in this fic. o_O

*is so totally biased* XP

I haven't read Diana Palmer or Harth brothers. <_<

Aaaah... poor poor Sesshoumaru. *cackles in glee*

Yay for your updates! :D I can't wait for Sesshoumaru to meet his puppy again.

Kagome needs to have her revenge. I hate to say it but I like seeing Sesshoumaru squirm. :P