rate_review Reviews

I really liked this story, it had lots of ups and down and kept me enthralled. I think you have a real talent for writing and look forward to reading more.

PS: about the haters for not finishing a story YET, piss on them. I admit I will bitch and moan at not having a finished story but is only because I am attached to it and the characters and have done the same for a book series that has hooked me but know I will always come back for more.

I love that you ended it with Jakotsu's show. That guy is hilarious. I knew Kagome would forgive them all and I'm certainly glad you realistically made it a slow process, but I don't think I could have done that. I would never trust any of their good intentions to be sincere when they so easily villified her and were so cruel. It seems like they were tested and the true colors came out. And whether Kagome was guilty or not, for Koga to call her up just to call her a whore when she was pregnant? Not cool. I would think she would have cut some of them out of her son's life. Sesshomaru told her he always loved her, but he reminds me of the idiot in Much Ado About Nothing who laughs and carries on after Hero dies, but then sobs like a baby once he finds out she's innocent. Similar story line. I really loved that movie, but that one part kept me from buying it. I could believe that Sesshomaru was a different man, like his father said to Kagome, if he didn't take her son away in a fit and was cruel all over again. I also wish Kagome's bodyguard didn't betray her that night. I wanted him to be loyal like Kikyo and Hojo. :-( Give the poor girl a break! This was very entertaining and you're a great writer. I still think it would have been better if she had purified some body parts off. ;-)

"If they were hurt, someone would pay dearly." Give me a break, Sesshomaru! They were hurt very deeply and it was by you and all of your scuzzy friends, family, and her family. And they were all talking about getting revenge on Ayame. Look in the mirror, people! Get revenge on yourselves. Ayame doesn't love Kagome. All of the others supposedly did. That's a much worse betrayal. Everything they want to heap onto Ayame should be heaped onto themselves. Kikyo did say they were hypocrites. That being said, this is very entertaining.

I kind of wanted Kagome to purify his arm off after Sesshomaru told her that she and his son would be moving in with him. Couldn't she have purified his arm off? Or maybe another part? It would grow back, wouldn't it? He is manhandling her after all.

Oh Sweet Jesus I love it! This is a BRILLIANT story! I also love "The Jewel Within" I love your stories and you are a wonderful author:D

I absolutely loved it. Although it was really different for Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's family to be mean to her (they're both usually so nice), it was an amazing story and I loved it!

this was a great story and i really liked it, although it does need an au notice in the summary.

Do you watch Marry lol i liked those two chapters with the talk show. serves that bitch Ayume right. you captured the character perfectly. i love it but now i must go so i may read the rest. HohOhOHohOhohOhOho what is Kagura gonna do

Great job with you're stories, I really like your ideas and how well they are put together. Just a quick comment about you reply to the rude readers, power to you. Keep enjoying what you do (and do well), and allowing us as readers to enjoy the great work you create.

wow.. i totally loved this fic... you write well too... it's going down as one of my favorites. i like that you didn't rush the story and explained the details. Good job and keep writing those fics...