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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Let me say this, she broke the unspoken female code of loyalty. If I told my friend that I like so and so and then they turn around and date the guy instead of telling me, go for it, stop being so shy, I'm going to tell him for you then, well, that person wasn't really my friend and she deserves never to have a friend again. I've never done that to any of my friends and I expect that they respect me in return even if I don't ever tell the guy that I like him, that guy is off limits to any of my friends and the same works for me even if I may like a guy if my friend told me she liked him first than it's time for me to like someone else.

Now, the story was well written as if I was looking into Kagome's life at school. I normally don't read stories where all of them are in the present era and where Inuyasha is a normal guy, but this was a good story I enjoyed reading it.

I think you should tell him... if this story was about you.... I can relate I hate those kind of friends the ones that you confide in only to benifet them. Yes it was betrayel because she knew about how Kags felt... Great one shot... I cried it reminded me of my time with the man I still love with my very being, unfortunetly we had are moment young and stupid I was, and were no longer together and now hes untouchable. I never stop thinking about him, So in a way I can relate with your story....

I dont know Life has a weird way of working out... I guess my advice is Take the moment dont let it slip past your fingers, because you may never get it back.

So sorry,
Chanda

That was so sad!! I was crying!!! Really good though!!!!!

"As A.K McDowell Said, '... that little bit of courage...'"