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for Steamy Nights of a Threesome

by YoukaiObsessed

person Original Sinner (NSI)
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please ma'am.... can I have some more???? *wipes up drool from chin and wriggles in seat like a crazed hentai* Uhmmm.... and I'll have that gift wrapped too thanks love.... preferably hand delivered by Sesshie and Sephie.... oh.... and I'll have them gift-wrapped to hon...

K.... Did I mention... TOMORROW!!! or as soon as possible anyway *please!*

Peace badgirl,

The sinner ~_^
person wulfgar
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just had to come and read another one of your stories.
I found out about you from a friend on the guild.
The pairing pulled me in, just like on the other story.
The two men are hot with each other or adding someone.
You write in present tense, it's refreshing.
Update this one soon too, please!
person V
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write new chapters for both stories they are uber hot!
person I_Naraku
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you so need to update this story
person Rose
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If this is going to be as graphic and detailed as your other stories are, I will just die of happiness.
I wish I was Sango right now. Keep going with this cuz its really good. Please update soon.
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! No!!! What is this? Only one damned chapter? Shit girlfriend... you are supposed to be my hentaid goddess?!! Where the friggin hell is chapter two sweetpea!?? Nuh-uh... don't be doing this to me woman! You know that I'm going solo now and this story is just the biggest tease to hit AFF yet.... where the hell is the rest of it? Like now? *rubbing thighs together in anticipation* Did I happen to mention in past emails that I'm allergic to latex? So pleaaaaassseee..... get the picture sweetpea and finish off - so I can (hmmmm)Nuh... AFF is definitely not the place to be when there is no suitable tangible release for the flarn written by authors such as yourself..... UPDATE!@
person nani
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot please more
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW...all I can say is...YUMMY...I hope you update this soon, because although there is no lemonin the first chapter, the sexual tension in unbelievable, and right now, the anticipation is killing me. Sango is one lucky bitch...what I wouldn't give to be in the middle of those two... OH YEAH...anytime, anyplace.
person LdyMoon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, it's been a week you know that this pregnant woman is waiting, is this pay back for the cliffies I write in my story? *winks and giggles* No seriously, I've been wondering what is going to happen, so, I'll keep checking, in the meantime...yeah....I'll wait, it will be well worth it. Your sex scenes are hot, very visual that's what I picked up from the other story I've read by you so your next chapter will boost my libido that's been waning since I got knocked up. *cheesy stupid smile*

~Those who dance are thought mad by those who hear not the music.~ Annonymous
person Green Rose
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now this will be fun.... *giggles madly* Yes, yes... more smut... more sex.... more smut...
Thumbs up!!