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for Steamy Nights of a Threesome

by YoukaiObsessed

schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This interesting, good, and hot! Please update another chapter soon!
person Ppalae1
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please another chapter this story is really hot. I want to find out what happens after they get to Sephiroth's house. Please update.
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my ever living gods!!! please please please update soon so i can read the rest of this really hot story!!!
person navi
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the story can you please hurry and write the second chapter please.
Also great creativity by using the two sexiest people in the anime world.
thanx for writing!
person Opal
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that this fanfiction is actually the only hentai fanfiction I've ever read and looked forward to reading.
Update soon, I would love to read more. (Update Seduction of Swords first, that one is too addicting)

Just a suggestion, the words "hot as hell" and "sexy as hell" are used too much. Too get rid of the feeling that one is reading the same line over and over again, I suggest different word choices.
person Dark Electro
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo when you gonna continue the story it`s good like hell
person Jessica
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo,great story,KEEP WRITING DAMN YOU!! JK. LMAO
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Despair...Despair....DES-FREAKING-SPAIR!!!! Yes sweet hentai-honey... I am in f**cking Despair.... You seem to give it soooo well too! Holding out on updates... baby, that is indeed DESPAIR....

Peace badgirl ~_^

Sinner
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh... and PS... thank you for the little mention in the opening of yor story...I kinda feel...happy... to share my hentai'd'ness to the point it impacts on someones life... cool. Share the smut I say. Speaking of which, when are you gonna share some of your delightful filth flarn... I'm so looking forward to Sango's impaling *squirms in chair* Sandwich anyone?

Bye sinful one....