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for Safe in the Enemy's Arms

by SereG

schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is good, you should write more.
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start to a story and I do hope you update soon! I love the pairing of Kagome with Naraku and look forward to reading more. Poor Kagome, I hope her dream does not come true and if it does, maybe Naraku will end up rescuing her.
person Lillian9
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Look after Zyephens_Insanity at Deviantart. In her gallery is a Kagome/Naraku picture.
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intreiging, in the situation where the groups are split up and he leaves for kikyo, the factors of the dream will be too much of a coincidence.

suggestion: put an extra space between paragraphs so it's easier to read. a line or something else between scene changes ~~~~~~~~~~~~ it also makes it so much prettier.

thank you,
ginny
person Allison
schedule May 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it great job!! I can't wait to see how Naruku fits into all of this!! :)
person naraku_lover
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I saw an Nar/kag picture on mediaminer.org, i loved it so much i had to print it.
person KKF
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write another chapter soon!! This sounds really good!
person Jax
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update now!!!!!!!! NOW NOW NOW! im sorry but i dont kow about kag/naku fan art but....plz write more! the world needs more naku/kag fanfics!
person AJ
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whips the tears away* That was a great chapter!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
person Lill
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I saw one Nar/Kag fanart once, but I can't remember where...Sorry...
Have you tried Fanart central.net? Deviantart.com ? I think it was somewhere there that I found it.
Hope it helps! ^_^
Anyway: Great story so far.
MELIKE! Keep up the good work!