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for The Bane of My Existance

by ShaeyaSedjet

person shippo-chan0805
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! your're story is amazing! i like the way you potrayed Kagome...people normal she her as a ditsy girl that falls in love with Inuyasha....i like this tomboy side to her

keep up the good work and i can't wait for the next chapter! if you ever need any advice...i'm open to help ya!

shippo-chan
person Jeszie
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this story here kiddo... it's really good and I think that you are a wonderful writer! You are one of the few people in this world that know how to write a good story!
person inugirl2003
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, good job keep going, got me intrigued :)
person Anaidil
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! This is an excellent story I really like it, no, I love it!!!!! I like the way you are developing this story and how you are writing it. You have a gift, you are a very talented writer. Keep up with the great work. I’m really looking forward in reading more chapters of this great story so update as soon as you can please.