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for The Bane of My Existance

by ShaeyaSedjet

schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good story!! please finish!
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was soooooooo funny at the end.
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading what you have here. I love it. I can't wait to see another chapter. Hope to see one soon. Take care.
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7...wow...first I was back remembering my mom's own passing, and then by the end of the chapter, off to wake my hubby up...effective and beautiful.
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love your story I cryed the hole time I wish i could have a relationship like that. . .*tears X3. . .Plz up date I really want to no what happens and day dream about my love life like this with InuYasha (I love him soooooo much X3) So plz up date
person Patty530
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story. It is amazing. I loved every bit of it. Sentences like go-to-hell-you-sorry-ass-son-of-a-retarded-monkey-slut, make dedicated smart asses like me proud and just a bit envious. Please up date soon. Don't give up on it, it's worth continuing.
person Gina
schedule February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I hope you will update soon you rock!
person ~ME
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far--the Inu/Kag relationship --the way its slowly developing--nice touch with words! I'm concerned though--all the past tense reflection on Kagome's part--makes me think this is not going to be a '...and they lived happily ever after ^_^...'--not to say, exactly, as such, but I so like a 'happy-they're-together-ending' --I hate bawling my eyes out! >.< Please--don't make me sob like a baby!!!!!!! Update soon??!!!
person BlackSand
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! At the cost of sounding like a broken record, I love this story. Although, I'm not fond of first person pov, I think you did a great job with it, describing Kagome's feelings towards Inuyasha and her current situation well. Inu's "hetero-life mate" status with Miroku had me laughing so hard. You totally nailed his character, the loveable but pain in the ass jerk and the image of Kagome in overalls, probably a throw back to Winrey from FMA, was a nice touch. Cute/tomboyish girl in overalls + jackass, sexy jerk + oddles of sexual tension = one hell of a great story! I hope you update soon!
person ashley
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was so good continue i want o know more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!