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Please don't charcter rape keiko.... everyone else does... please stop hurting her...

awesome chapter, can't wait to see the confrontation with keiko. I hope kagome bitch slaps that wench. She's such a bitch, I don't really care for her much. Keep up the good work. Hiei better return soon or Yusuke might decide to step in. *hands you Aoshi cookies*

Hiei better hurry his ass back home, before Kagome starts to lose ope. please update again soon.

Whaaaaaaa!!! Please come back Broken!! I miss you!! If you leave me hanging on your stories I will hunt you down and force you t write until they're all done. Grrrrrrr

I would just like to say that I enjoy all the stories both authors of this story write. I look every day for updates on them all. I really like this one and keep up the good work, you are appreciated.

Awesome chapter, and I'm finally glad things are looking up for our favorite miko. She's finally awake, and Hiei's true conviction should make coming back and getting some semblance of order back between the two. Maybe Yusuke can find a way to convince Keiko to forgive him, but if she does anything to hurt Kagome, there will be hell to pay, I am sure. Youko won't let anything more happen to her. That's for sure. Well, update when you can, the story is amazing!
Sayuri-chan

Wow, what a chapter. Well I firgured that it would have been much more physical between Keiko and Yusuke. I thought she would at least smack him around a bit. I knew that they wouldnt stay together, it just didn't feel right from the beginning. I feel bad for kagome, she is so sad. They way you guys write it is so on. The way the she plays tug of war with hewr mind trying to talk herself into suicide. The way that she doesn't eat and when she does she feels sick. The way that all she wants to do is stare or lay around remembering the good times and wanting them back. I feel her depresion, I feel sad. You did a really good job on that last chapter. I hope she's ok. Hiei is such an asshole, he should be by her side. maybe she would be better off with Yusuke or even Kurama. Can't wait for the next round! >^..^<

You guys are complete geniuses, and this story is just awesome. I don't particularly like that Hiei and Yusuke are fighting all the time, but hey! It's over our favorite miko, Kagome, and right now, she's in danger. The thing is, I wonder how she's going to pull herself together if she gets through this. Having more than one person after her affections, and even after the baby being lost and everything, all I can say is, "She's only human, for kami's sake!" Kurama will most likely be the one she identifies with at this time. So far, he's the one who doesn't hold any personal ties to hate or disappointment, like Hiei and Yusuke. Well, update soon, it's an awesome story.

Gods, if Hiei doesn´t move he will lose her forever and not because of the pills. I don´t want her to get with Yusuke *pout*

Well now I'm torn. At first I wanted Kagome to get back with Hiei but now I'm kinda leaning towards Yusuke. Then we have Youko, throwing him into the mix just makes things more confusing. Update soon!