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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person midnighttimberwolf
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done loved the new chapters you both have great stories out there and I hope you update all of them.... I had hoped that Kagome wouldn't lose the baby but all in all it was for the best at least have a fresh start knowing that she was loved in return. Again well done I approve this and other that are posted thee best thus far.
person Vivian
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I think you are doing a wonderful job with Keiko's reaction. You have made her nicer than I would have been to be honest. I wouldn't ask questions, he'd be meeting my tire iron of mercy real quick like. Keep up the wonderful job, I can't wait to see what happens. *hands you Aoshi cookies*
person cyntinell
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. I am almost caught up but you update to quickly for my slow reading lol I love the way it is so realistic like it could really happen. The dialog is perfect can't wait to read more
person sendosha
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! There is still hope for Kagome and Hiei! Thank you so much!
person Kagehoshi
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm all excited for the next chapter, please update soon. I hope Yusuke really gives it to that guy. Do the people who put that drug in Kagome's drink know she was hospitalized because of it? I think some one should let them know, so they can suffer with the guilt.
person azurephoenix
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating...it was a wonderful chapter...too bad Kags is being wayyyyyyy to forgiving. Please udpate soon.
person Ukk
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hhh,t he love. Ooh, can you do a menage e twa? Or maybe a square? Kagome needs al that protective reassurance yu know *nods sagely*
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if u stop this story i will cry till im blue in the face i wanna kno how its gonna end
person badkitty
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, I hope Hiei wont be gone too long. I can't wait to see what happens with Keiko in the next chapter. Bet some really bad things will be said and some feelings hurt. Who knows maybe even a cat fight. Update soon:)
person sendosha
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can see it coming, Hiei will lose her just because of his responsibilities to Mukuro. Damn it, that´s not fair. Yusuke is a idiot. He has no right to judge about him.