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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person Takhisiss
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Hiei ends up killing that guy. Yusuke did a good job, too bad he couldn't finish it. Can't wait for the next chaper. Please update soon
person Takhisiss
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke needs to learn to mind his manners. I would think it would be very dangrous to speak to Kurama like that. And he would be doing very well to learn to take advice as well. *Sigh* The brashness of youth I guess, it's a wonder any of us survive it all all. Very good chapter
person Takhisiss
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Hiei apologized, I'm impressed. I just hope she really believes him. I think I would cry if she didnt. *sniffle*
person Takhisiss
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo Hoo. Finally! It's about time he marked her and she accepted. Thank you :) I'm still curious about Yusuke and think he needs to get a grip. Eh well, maybe he will still grow up some. Anyways, great job :)
person azurephoenix
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH!!!Clifee!!!!!!!!!!!Please Please update soon....please.....with sugar on top.
person kougalover123
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Yusuke beats the crap out of Kanaye for his part in the drugs. i hope Hiei comes back soon. please update again soon.
person Mel
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is...Wow! I'm really liking this story. It's very well thought out, and it has a realistic story line.
Please keep writing...just stop with the cliffhangers! Unless you update really fast!
Mel
person Sayuri-chan
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, paybacks are a real biyach, ne? He will pay most dearly for messing with Kagome. Hiei though, I'm not so sure that he'll be so happy that Yusuke is getting the revenge instead of him. Well, another excellent chapter! Update soon!
person badkitty
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, this confrontation is exactly what I've been waiting for. Kanaye is gonna get his ass handed to him. I feel bad for Keiko and Kagome, but I'm still on Kagomes side.
person VB
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes!! You didn't forget to take Kanaye down as well. Just don't forget the other bitch Meiko or what ever her name is. In fact do me a favor and let Kurama and Hiei find out what Keiko said to Kagome and then put the Meiko bitch, Kanaye and Keiko in a room with Hiei, Kurama and Yusuke with no survallience from Koenma. The walls, ceiling and floor would be painted with blood.
Anyway looking forward to Yusuke's interrogation.