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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person Sayuri-chan
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Mukuro's going to do something that Hiei's NOT going to appreciate, I can just feel it, but I wonder how Kagome will take talking to her? I'm sure she will still show her true self to the demon onna, and hopefully, both will get some good insight on the other. Well, update soon!
person kougalover123
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dnag AFF for deleting reviews oh well i will review again keep up the good work please update again soon.
person wind
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sucks you lost reviews. will try and remember what i said before but uhhh it's been a while. for chapter 12 i really liked how the fight went. i was happy to see youko show up though. now maybe the idiot will get what he deserves
person wind
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 13, man yusuke's got balls to speak to kurama like that. is he looking for another fight? I'm glad mukuro called hiei back
person wind
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chpater 14. i liked how forceful hiei was when he talked to mukuro. now he just needs to get down to business and tell kagome what he wants. yusuke's going to be in for a rude awakening isn't he?
person Takhisiss
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I am worried about what Murkuro is planning now. Why would she think that Hiei would need to forgive her? please update soon
person dgasehs
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please write more
person mhall
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person purp1ebabe
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh oh is sumthing else gunna happen to kagome again?? i wanna find out so plz update soon
person bluemoon_175
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really really good, I think you should keep it a Kagome/Hiei fiction.