rate_review Reviews

Your plot line is different. And what Og up there is preaching shows how stupid they are. Us readers do want to be shocked and left on the edge of our seats. I'm sure he/she prolly likes to read the fics with the same ol' used out plotline where the gang is in highschool. Come on how many times hasn't THAT been used. There is so many of them and most have the same plot where Inuyasha is the badboy and Kagome is the little preppy girl. This story is original and different, your flame was a waste of space. I think with all the reviews it has you'd have stopped before opening your mouth. It is an interesting story, that hasn't been done before. Go back to your other fics, I'm sure the school bell is about to ring.

For the author keep up the good work, can't wait for another chapter!!

write more please

I suppose it was with some feelings of disquiet and disgust that I read that last review posted by Ogen. You don't like the story, that's fine. Don't read it then. I did a search for your work and couldn't find any. What gives? I'd love the opportunity to find out what your version of quality work is. After I read some of your work, then I will consider whether your opinion is one I should give a tinkers damn about or not. Until I see your work tho, I fail to see where you have the right to be so negative about others work. Go find some of the others work that paints happy faces. And let those of us who enjoy Ryus and brokens work continue to do so. I guess I am what you called one of their dubious audience but I am proud of it.
Ryu, no problem with the story interruption. This needed to be addressed. Please update soon.

Damn that was an excellent chapter though evil at the end..... I can imagine what she wants to do, only if Kagome agrees to it of course. If not I'm sure there would be one hell of a cat fight. Anyways update soon....

I really like this fic & can't wait to see what happens next & if this will be an eventual threesome, which I would love. Update soon, please.

GREAT CHAPTER
UPDATE SOON

Cant wait to see what you've got up your sleeve with the two ladies! Keep it comin'!

great chapters I wonder what she is going to do to Kagome. please update again soon.

ohh i loved this chapter lol anyways keep up the good work!

Hiei is so sexy. please update again soon.