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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person kougalover123
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great so far. i can't believe Hiei would be that much of a jerk about this. please update again soon.
person Lady Banshee 999
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I say so. :P LOL, actually, this was the first time reading this story. Which I must say is great. Can't wait to see what happens when he finds out what's wrong with Kag's. Or what he will do to the shrimp because of his actions. *snicker* Please update soon! :D TTFN!
person Kura-kun\'s-lovr
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted to say I am a big fan of both of your writings so I'm hoping that this story will be just as good as your other ones. Well, the review: Stupid Hiei being a bastard! Ryu get your mate in line! I hope you smacked him a good one off screen and made him feel bad....and I hope you made him watch Barney for hours on end! Um, I won't ask what the pairings are because I know how that bugs some people, but if you know who I am you probably already know which pairings and people I like together. Okay well I'll be going now! Hope you update soon, can't wait to see what happens next?

Ja ne
Kura-kun's-lovr
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so cool keep going please
person Gypsy
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!!!!!!! Evil Cliffie Evil Cliffie!!!!!!! No no no no no no keep goin...It looks really good you two, you GOT To keep going and SOON!!!!

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