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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person Cyntinell
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It didn't suck please update
person ZeldaFitz
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still loving it! I hope you don't go easy on Hiei. He may be emotionally constipated, but that doesn't excuse anything. Besides, he left Kagome to fend for herself. He will have no right to expect her to take him back.
person Wind
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man, she thought it was Hiei? thats got to be a blow to the ego but will they even remember it in the morning? and what did they give her anyway that would make her feel so bad? will it hurt the baby? what's hiei going to say when he finds out yusuke made her his mate? You must update!
person Sayuri-chan
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy kukamunga!! O_O;;; I think something just got totally f'ed up! *eyes are glued to the computer screen*looks to you* Are you SURE you know what you're doing? Cause it's driving me crazy! I didn't think that would happen! Please, PLEASE update soon....omgeez...what's going to happen...@_@ <--Swirly anime eyes
It was excellent, and unexpected! Can't wait to read what happens next!
Sayuri-chan
person takhisiss
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good first chapter. I could imagine Hiei acting like that too. Sad isn't it. Meh, methinks he will either come around to a more proper way of thinking or he had better do some hard thinking about having a mate period. *Sighs* Some males can be so stupid.
person Vivian (NSI)
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll leave you something!!!!!! *Hands you some Aoshi cookies* Great chapter and Hiei is an ass. He left her so technically she didn't cheat on him. So he should just apologize and be a man about it. Update soon please.
person Bree
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. It looks like Kagome's friends have really messed up Kagome's and Yusuke's lives now. I hope that searing pain doesn't mean Kagome is loosing the baby. Look forward to your update.
person Silverkitsune26
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello (bows humbily) ^_^

Thiis is really good, keep up the good work. I really look forward to the next update.

Love, Silverkitsune26 ^_^
person Vivian (NSI)
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job! That was a steamy lemon, worth reviewing for. Wish I was Kags at the moment. Well, maybe not, Hiei is going to be one pissed off munchkin. *Hands you Aoshi cookies and some milk*
person kougalover123
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. I can't wait to see how Kaogme and Yusuke react to what they just did, especially since Kagome thought it was Hiei. please update again soon.