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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person Badkitty
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good I glad you know that your evil, and now I will remind you again, YOUR EVIL!!! I just knew something like this would happen. Dtupid ass bitches probably killed the baby. Poor Kagome was tricked and now Hiei thinks she's a whore. God I'm dying to know what happens next. Damn the suspense is killing me! >^..^<
person sendosha
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It´s really not fair to Kagome. She will lose the child, won´t she? I don´t blame Hiei just her fucking "friends". Kagome should have known Hiei better than that I mean that he didn´t want children in the first place. Oh angst is good.
person Wind
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit! She fell! Tell me her friends going to catch her! Or Hiei! He comes back right? Even if he's mad he would let her get hurt like that! What the hell kind of ending is that? Pure evil, that's not a cliff hanger thats fucking torture! AHHHHHH you must update I'm going insane waiting!
person midnighttimberwolf
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow now that's what I call a story.... I loved it.... You've done your homework.... Great job I must admit.... I hope you post another chapter or two very soon can't wait to read it....
person azurephoenix
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...cliffee...please update soon.
person kougalover123
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i hope Hiei doesn't do to much damage to Yusuke, but if he does he deserves it. please update again soon.
person Wind
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll say it again. Holy Shit! I'm surprised Kurama didn't beat Yusuke's ass for that one. Damn, what is keiko going to say when she finds out? Whats hiei going to say? is Yusuke going to be arrested? Damn, ya gotta update. You guys are evil with the cliffies!
person takhisiss
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i think that i can not beieve this. Hiei is going to be so pissed. I wonder what Kagome will think of her so called friends after this too. Keep up the good work, I cant wait to read more. Update please.
person takhisiss
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'll bite and i will review. This is a great story for sure. Many thanks for writing it. And I hope it does work out, I just can't imagine Kags without Hiei. Somehow they seem to belong together. Please update soon.
person kougalover123
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe Hiei couldn't tell that she was telling the truth as she knew it. Kagome's friends really screwed her life even more, and now it looks like she lost the only link that she still had with Hiei. poor Kagome. I can't wait to see what happens next please update again soon.