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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person Diane
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this & can hardly wait for the next chapter to see who does what & to whom.
person Vivian(NSI)
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetness, very good chapter. I think Hiei needs a good swift kick in the ass and Yusuke needs to take a long good hard look at himself. Kagome just needs to say fuck it and try some incest type love with Kurama. I would!!! Update soon please! *Hands you an Aoshi cookie*
person kougalover123
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
poor Hiei will Kagome ever believe him again. please update again soon.
person sendosha
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please you two, update soon. I can´t wait to see what will happen next.
person takhisiss
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a good story. And I can't wait for you to update. My heart goes out to Hiei and Kagome both. Meh, really all of them I suppose (with the exception of Kameko, Maiko and Kayane ) Those 3 would look very interesting with their bodies turned inside out. Anyways I love what youve done. Keep up the good work.
person badkitty
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's on now. That bitch is gonna pay dearly when Hiei gets ahold of her. Kagome should take Hiei back and I'm afriad that Yusuke should get his ass kicked by Keiko and Hiei. update soon I can't wait for the confrontation.
person Sayuri-chan
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic just keeps getting better. I normally can't stand angsty fics (I'm a fan of the happy story with no death) but when written well, I enjoy them as well as happy stories. ^^ These stories you and Ryu chan write are really great, and well done angst. This was another great chapter! I love how Hiei finally tells her the truth, and I can see her denying his word. I mean, he made it kinda clear to her how he felt about the whole situation, and her reaction is just to be expected. Well, update soon!
Sayuri-chan~
person moosegirl13
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! Please update soon. Peace out! ~_^
person Wind
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I'm surprised Hiei didn't kill Yusuke. Is this Maiko bitch going to die? Will Kagome take him back when he gets there? I don't think she should. At least not right away. He needs time to suffer for how he acted. Can't wait to see what happen next!
person Vyncent
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most excellent and grippng story. Love that you are updating so quickly and look very much forward to the next chapter. Keep up the superb team work and please update soon.