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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person bluemoon_175
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good keep the updates commin. I say Kagome should live, and get patched things up with Hiei.
person badkitty
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked and I can't get enough. This story is so good and just keeps getting better. Can't wait to see Keiko and yusuke go at it, hope it's vicious. muwhaha
person sendosha
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and I love dark and angsty fics so please continue. And to be honest both series have many scenes where it´s really dark and angsty. It´s not that they just play "truth and dare" in the sengoku jidai or in Makai, they fight for their lifes, against their enemies and against their own dark sides.
person azurephoenix
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...that was really sad. I hope Kagome becomes stronger...this is all so depressing...hopeully things will get better for her. Please update soon.
person Vivian (NSI)
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! Can't believe Hiei is just leaving her alone, thats a man for you. I see you are putting that borrowed blender to great use and I love it. Please update soon. *hands you aoshi cookies* love you girl
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was sad kagome trying to kill herself hmm.... i wonder......
person kougalover123
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter please update again soon i want to know what happens.
person Wind
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is it with the cliffies? Are you both trying to make us rip our hair out? If so you're succeeding in your task! You know the wait is going to kill me right? RIGHT? I hope you plan on updating soon or I shall send my army of sporks after you! Seriously though, good chapter (evil cliffie!) Update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kaeli
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a truly good story...keeping in tune with ur usual greatness
person Kagehoshi
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm crying right now, that was so beautiful. I'm dying for the next chapter.