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for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams

by MistyRain

person Diane
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You gals seem to be enjoying the cliffies, I'm really enjoying this & can hardly wait for the next chapter, especially since I really want to know what happens next.
person azurephoenix
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH...that was just evil...another clifee..AHHHHHHH...please update soon.
person azurephoenix
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH...that was just evil...another clifee..AHHHHHHH...please update soon.
person Takhisiss
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh, another cliff hanger. I love it but it also drives me nuts. LOL. Very good chapter, please update soon.
person tonia
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter!!! please update soon.
person Vivian
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more, I think you should make it a threesome. Yusuke and Hiei are hot together, very much so. I clicked on the review button so I expect another chapter soon. Don't disappointment me! Loves ya! *hands you Aoshi cookies and a glass of milk*
person kougalover123
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if the guys are going to read what Kagome wrote in her diary, and how they will react to it. please update again soon.
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm... so youko likes kagome but kuramr just likes her in a brotherly way i wonder how that's gunna work out....
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooo please please update quick it almost made me cry for it to end in a cliff hanger, but this is one of ya'lls best storys yet.
person Vivian (NSI)
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats false advertisement, I clicked the review button and the next chapter didn't come up. What's up with that????? How dare you do that to me??? No more Aoshi cookies for you, not till I get to see Keiko bitch slapped. Okay you can have one, *Hands you a cookie*. Update soon my queen..