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I just found your story, I couldn't stop reading until I finished it. 

I love how you developed each of the characters and the plot. I know it's been some time since you've updated but I hope that maybe you'll come back and continue the story.

 

I'm just wondering when you are going to update your stories and finish this one or are not going to.

You know, I've read stories by both of you. And I've loved both. I've read your authors notes and read about your ct=rits and flames. I don;t really undestand it. I love thi story. Yes it's grittty and often sad and really really intense but that's life. I'm not saying I don;t wish for a hapier story. That would be a lie. At some point in time we all want that sweet sappy love story where everything is rses and sunshine. But wiht this it feels more real. It really draws you in because of that realism. It makes me want to read more and more. My only complaint, if you can really call it that is that the beginning kind of threw me off for a min. but in the end that doesn't really bother me that much either. I like how it's not the usual story where Kagome gets tired of Inuyasha cheating. Or how Hiei is so nice. At least as nice as Hiei can be. In this story and others he seems more real. Here's the Hiei we all know from yu yu hakusho. And as in real life Kagome isn't all happiness. she's real. she feels. she suffers. To me this story is life. Yeah in the end they all get to be happy in some way or other but they have to work hard to get to that point. It's not *boom* and they're hapy. they have to sufer and try and work for that hapiness. I love how real it is. I love the both of you. I'll admit I don't write stories so I can't really criticize you and in the end my review is just that of a fan and fan fiction reader. But I still hope my words my at least let you know that people out there really love your stories. now for the big question...WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I'm really into this story and I want to read more. please update soon.

this is a great story, please update it soon

I really enjoyed reading this again...and I'm sad that it will likely not be finished! But thank you for what is posted.

Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Hiei/Yusuke/Kagome settle their problem. Hopefully give Yusuke the chance as the secondary mate to Kagome.

Oh please. I know it's hard to ignore stupid reviewers out there, especially ones who have no life and make it a point to bitch at you if the story doesn't fit a standard that they feel like is required in "their" fanfics. =_= I'd offer you advice like "just ignore it, your story rocks either way," (because I really do think it rocks), but I've seen so many GREAT writers get attacked for their stories by reviewers who don't even know how to write or know how to appreciate good stories when they see one.

I can't help but wonder whatever happened to just NOT READING a fanfic if you don't like it. I usually just keep my trap shut if I have nothing good to say and it really really REALLY irks me whenever inconsiderate people leave reviews that tick off my favorite writers.

I can't say I can blame you for this author's note. I hate stupid reviewers.

You know, I'm a sucker for happy endings and try to avoid dark fics, but I LOVE this story. It's taking me for an emotional ride and I love it. =) I can't wait to read more, so please please please just ignore that nasty review. =)

Awww poor Youko. But, why can't Yusuke do the same? Chit, it should be reversed and Yusuke should have been the one to step out of the way. I understand breaking to work on other things. But I will still say please update soon. I love this story.

Poor Youko, it must be hard for a kitsune to not getting something he truly desired, this is a time I wished he would get his old body back. Shuichis and Youkos personalities are like day and night. Good chapter.

thats sad. gramps kicked the bucket. no more wards for him i guess. awesome chapter, who's this chick of kuramas? *Hands you Aoshi cookies* please update soon