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So glad that you took the time to update even though you must be very busy. You describe Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's emotions and actions in such detail that it is almost like watching a movie. Sesshoumaru becoming so ill is quite an unexpected development and I wonder what exactly is in the chest? I can't wait to see what you have planned for the two. This is very angsty. I love it.

And your welcome for the ideas. If you ever have problems and want my help in advancing the plot, email me so that we don't give it away to the readers. It looks like you already have some plans. Can't wait to see what they are.

Keep up the good work and don't worry about getting out another chapter. It is the holidays after all.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

^_^

O.O I pary to the gods that the update will come soon. This fanfiction is just to good not to finish

Thanks Snowfall for the ideas ^.^ It helped me alot! And, Jade, I do plan on continuing it - it's just a bit harder now trying to update it a smuch as I'd like since I work two jobs. But hey...I'm not giving up. I'm actually enjoying writing this one and plan on finishing it ^.^ I know, I know...I have typose and such here and there; I've just gotten too lazy to go back and fix them >.>

I stumbled accross this story and decided to read it for the mere fact that it mentioned one of my favourite bands (The Cruxshadows). And I have to say, I fell in love with it. The chapters are short, and there are a few grammar errors, but the amazing discription more than makes up for it. I just wanted to ask, do you plan to continue this story? It's a wonderful story, and I think it would be a shame if it was abandoned.

You are doing an excellent job, although there are a couple of words used incorrectly. I typically ignore typos unless there is a massive amount. Yours are far and few between. You are probably just unhappy with the last chapter because you didn't take it further. You're right. Inuyasha needs some alone time to regroup.

Here is an idea if your running into plot problems. Perhaps he should drop out of sight for awhile. Screw contracts. He should get a wad of cash and lose himself on an island while he figures out what he wants to do, what he wants to be. Obviously, some people are a bad influence and his thoughts of Sesshoumaru only torture him. Maybe he could take on a whole new identity; disguise himself and forget who he was and where he came from. A forced amnesia or delusion. If I were him, I would resent everyone right now and need to be away from them. How to do it is the trick.

Hope this helped, but if not, oh well.

I enjoy this story and hope that you continue to write.

Snowfall

Oh this, is such an awsome fic! I was a bit sceptical when I read the summary about Inuyasha being a lead singer, but you make it work!

^_^^_^! (I Love Twins!)

that was sad poor inu ;_; lovely by the way

Ahh the tension, poor Inu, he's a mess.

Another great chapter!!
Still hope that they can work
things out.
please update soon!

Great chappie... beyond great. I am so happy with how this chapter went, you displayed the emotions very well and very vividly. I am really enjoying this story, the modern feel to it, and the over all strong emotions both on Inu's and Sessy's behalfs. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and I look forward to seeing where you take this story. Sayo.