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by ChibiPorunga

person Chibi-Porunga
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now, now. I never said whether Inuyasha did or didn't gorge himself on the drugs. You'll just have to wait until the next chapter to find out what happened :p
person Snowfall
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* That was so sweet. I'm glad that it wasn't ruined so quickly. Whew! Had me going there for a minute. Again, another excellent chappie.

Snowfall
person Snowfall
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must have been out of it when I read chappie 13. That really was bittersweet. Sesshoumaru on his knees and practically weeping, or at least it seemed that way, was very touching. And what Inuyasha said to him was so appropriate, but so harsh at the same time. Well, done. I would have liked to have seen the parting at the school, whether or not there had been uncertainty at seeing each other again, or when and if, and how they ended up together at the chateau. I would definitely have no problem waiting longer for chapters or the end of the story in order to see more detail. It's as though something is missing because parts are being fast forwarded. I hope you haven't grown bored with the story. I'll definitely be reading it again. It's wonderful. As always, I look forward to the next chappie. Um...there is one, right?

Snowfall
person K-ster.
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fun for the whole family... Well, maybe not. I loved it, however. ^.^
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I try to make the chapters longer, but sometimes there just has a stopping point for me and I wouldn't want to ramble...cause when I ramble, I tend to go wayward, LoL. Yeah, there will be another chapter and another and another. I don't see an ending to this anytime soon ^.^
person Snowfall
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru getting down on his knees! But then, why should Inuyasha trust Sesshoumaru? He had been rejected because he had wanted to pursue his dream. What other decisions that Inuyasha makes will cause him to be rejected again? Will Sesshoumaru use their love to control Inuyasha? And if that happens, will he be able to stay away from the drugs? Inuyasha must answer the questions of whether or not he wants to be obediant should Sesshoumaru give him ultimatums. How much of his freedom of self is he willing to give up to have the one he loves? It's not so easy. I'm scared for Inuyasha. Can you tell? Can Sesshoumaru accept Inuyasha as he is, or for what he wants to be and do? Is he accepting him now only because Inuyasha has chosen a different career? So many doubts.

Can't wait til the next chappie!

Snowfall
person Snowfall
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read the last three chapters again and...Ach! I am so confused! How can Inuyasha just fall into Sesshoumaru like that? I want to just knock him upside the head. Has he no fear? Sure, Sesshoumaru is humbling himself, sort of. LOL But how long will that last? How long before he sticks his nose in the air and tells Inuyasha to change a decision or leave? Sorry, I guess I'm really worked up about it. Which means...you're a good author!

Mmm, I bet Sesshoumaru looks like hell after being sick for so long. Are you going to keep Inuyasha in the dark about that?

Snowfall
person Chibi-Porunga
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Snowfall! It's a great feeling knowing that someone is really enjoying this story. Ah, the questions!! I'm not revealing anything...yet. ^.^
person Lady Aqualyne
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man... the ups and downs of those two... and then the cliffy. Its nice to see Inu trying to get better and the new job was definately a shocker. I was surprised to see that Sessy had found him already, but that makes it more interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
person Chibi-Porunga
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been busy with the holidays, so sorry for not updating any sooner; I don't usually begin anything new until I get another piece of the puzzle I can visualize in my head first and it depends what has inspired me that sometimes determines where the plot decides what direction to take - since I was watching the music video for "Wings Of A Butterfly", for some reason the lead singer reminded me of what Inu would look like if he was the lead singer of a punk band...O.o, weird I know, LoL! Thank you to everyone who has review and is anxious to see what perils I toss Inu and Sesshie into next. To put to rest any fears, I do plan on finishing this, so please don't worry about me ever abandoning this piece ^.^