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sooooooooo when are so going to finish this story??

Great! Glad to see you are going to finish this. ^-^

If you need help getting the next chappie going, I make a good sounding board and have helped several authors get over a slump. Email me if you would like my help.

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Well, nice lemon. I believe that you could possibly take into the next chapter.
You may want to head into the couple gaining each other's trust. How can they
manage that after everything that they have been through? Is Inuyasha going
to remain being a teacher? How is Sesshoumaru going to treat him now? What
are the hurdles that they will need to overcome? Should Inuyasha severe all
ties with his former friends? They could become a real problem. I don't know
that Inuyasha was so much addicted to drugs as drowning his sorrows. Those
friends are trouble waiting to happen. I think that Sesshoumaru should have
an unpleasant run in with them and Inuyasha should insist that Sesshoumaru
allow him to deal with it. It would be an opportunity for Inu to show his loyalty
to Sesshoumaru. However, Sesshoumaru still needs to prove himself to Inu.

Take your time. Don't let it overwhelm you. I often feel that way when I work on a story... god knows my last one Shadow Lover drove me insane when it came to many of the chapters. I was never satisfied... and now its happening again with another story. Take your time is the biggest advice I can give you, the chapter will come to you in time... don't force it or it'll only drive you insane. I'll definately be around whenever you update.

I guess what we need to see in the next chapter is if Inuyasha is going to continue to be a teacher now that he has been found or if he will be required to live up to his contract obligations and how both he and Sesshoumaru will deal with it. We need to see if the two plan to continue living together or apart while just seeing each other. Will they argue over that point? Would it be a good idea for Inuyasha to give up his independence in favor of pleasing Sesshoumaru? Just how dependent on each other are they willing to be? That could be a bone of contention. Well, that's something to think about.

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Ooooh, lemony, lemony goodness. Loved the toe sucking!

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WooHoo! That was a close one. Whew! So, he didn't screw up? Or is he lying? I'm confused now. But I'm glad that Sess took him back. So wonderful. Great chapter!

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Oh, sorry. Didn't see your post to the review board. Kewlies! Inuyasha resisted! I think. Okies. Back to anxiously awaiting next chappie! I know that I sound like a kid, but I actually have two adult children of my own. So, no worries.

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Nooooooooo! Inu! How could you!? OMG! How will Sesshoumaru react? Will he go the route of tough love and break Inuyasha's fragile trust in him, or will he forgive him this once? Questions, questions. I hope Sesshoumaru gives Kouga and Miroku a sound beating. Not that it would help. Oh well.

Can't wait for the next chappie!


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