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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well you weren't kidding when you said that the first part "wasn't pretty"...i love your wording...and your descriptions are awesome...both with the killing and the *other part* lol. great job :)
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(wolf whistle) WHHHHHOOOT! That was some hot sacriLICOIUS sex! (that word is sacriligious and delicious mixed together btw) That attack on Miroku was some tenchu, divine justice from a vengeful god in the form of youkai Inuyasha baby, oh yeah..... that got my youki up, except I would tear out his throat with my teeth and stain the damn carpet too in a spray of crimson water. HMM HMMM..... once more you convinced me you have some vice and dice :P Alot more on the vice here (winks)
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crisper and fresher style of writing. Well done showing of emotion for the lemon scene. EGO STROKE for the inu skye! All hail the yash,s mission!!!!
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...! I'm reviewing again! lol. I love ur writing...this is coming along so well...it's leaving a bad taste in my mouth (thats a good thing in this case). Thank you for the disclaimers!! W/O which...this would be an even harsher read. Gawd those are funny as hell lmao.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
inu, my fave descript had to be the part about feeling meglomanical, that was just genius. I found myself smiling when I got to that >:P Well hope to see Kags soon! Bloody fun drug romp as always (lol)
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(puts two fingers in mouth and whistles very badly) VERY SEXILY DONE! I got all hot and bothered with this scene. Inuskye, you do a good job at uhm. portraying club life? )lololool) I'm laughing near you, not at you :P Everyone better recongize this inu's talent. She's my muse in disguise
heart heart laurainu
heart heart laurainu
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, look forward until the next update.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooo very mysterious, ne! love it, inu
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude 180 hits and I'm the first to write a review??? GAWD! I don't believe it! This is fucking awesome dude I'm loving it. I expect another chapter when u get ur ass back from work! You rock :) You're doing a great job blending the song into the story...or the story into the song...whichever, lol.