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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was in panic. Your story disappeared (with my nice long review) for 3 days! I was about to e-mail you. This is one of the best, most beautifully writen story I ever read.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are God. Seriously. This has to be one of the most amazing things I have ever read. I was like glued to the moniter from the first paragraph. I was literally holding my breath in anticipation. It was really extrordinarily written, and I love it. Poor Kagome. Poor Sesshomaru even. And poor Miroku and Sango. And even though I don't like him, poor Inu Yasha. I've never been a big fan of this show, but I love this story. <3
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is so cool and I cant wait till you update it. Please update as soon as possible!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an extremely intriguing work that I'm hoping to be able to read more of soon in the future.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm almost positive I read this when Single Spark was up and running. And I'm also pretty sure I was just as enraptured with this story then as I am now.
This. Fic. Is. Amazing.
You have an uncanny ability to take the briefest, most perfunctory thoughts or actions and make them extraordinarily infinite. While normally I can't stomach a story without dialogue, I felt Kagome's thoughts and memories, and her observance of Sesshoumaru's pain like I was hearing the dialogue of her mind. It spoke volumes through your eloquent, engaging writing. In all honesty, while I know there's a million more turns to this story, I felt that the past event of Rin's death and Kagome and Sesshoumaru's subsequent moment, in and of itself, it was beautifully whole. It was satisfying in its tenderness and simplicity, and frankly, if I can be that affected by four chapters that I think are mainly for setting up the main plot, I can't wait to see where you go from here.
This. Fic. Is. Amazing.
You have an uncanny ability to take the briefest, most perfunctory thoughts or actions and make them extraordinarily infinite. While normally I can't stomach a story without dialogue, I felt Kagome's thoughts and memories, and her observance of Sesshoumaru's pain like I was hearing the dialogue of her mind. It spoke volumes through your eloquent, engaging writing. In all honesty, while I know there's a million more turns to this story, I felt that the past event of Rin's death and Kagome and Sesshoumaru's subsequent moment, in and of itself, it was beautifully whole. It was satisfying in its tenderness and simplicity, and frankly, if I can be that affected by four chapters that I think are mainly for setting up the main plot, I can't wait to see where you go from here.
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know how much I like this story, and I hope that you update soon!!! BTW, what song and/or Album are you quoting? I adore TMBG (it's so great to know I'm not alone in loving TMBG!), but I've have been trying to get all of their albums, but I'm not sure of song titles and album nanes. If you could help, I'd appreciate it! Update soon!
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this before on SingleSpark I think. Beautifully writen. Excellent work.