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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I want to know what exactly is happening so hurry up. :)
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice job on these last three chapters. You did a great job getting that fear from Kagome. She doesn't know what Sesshomaru is going to do, though I liked her assessment that he was going to kill her...or most likely kill her. The scene when the spell takes control was believable and felt that Kagome really was losing her sense of self. I was happy that you didn't have Sesshomaru and Kagome fall in love afterwards - that would have completely thrown me out of the story. Instead Kagome is ashamed of what she's done and Sesshomaru is back to his usual self. His arrogance and desire to kill her afterwards was great. Nice job.
- LtSonya
- LtSonya
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. I actually cried! Poor Rin-chan....
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is probably one of the best fuckin Sess/Kag fics I've ever read. Your writing style is just so awesome and you write in such a fluent, descriptive way. Keep up the good work.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is so good where did u come up with the original idea mostly u see peops just copyin eachother now a days and this is sooooooooooo good lol plz do this lowly reader one faver and update really really REALLY soon lol anyways ... i hope u plan to continue to write other fabulous stories after u finish this one or hey i wouldnt even mind while u were writin this one lol >.- (wink) anyways i shall look forward to ur next chapters and ja matta for now
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absouloutly love it! ^_^ I'm dieing to Know more.
A part has me confused though? MMM....what happened
to her in the museum, when the shikkon stared to
shine? I'm teribley confused. It would be nice if
you told me what happened? ^_^ Oh wells
I love it. There's always a twist that leaves you
leaning out of your seat in anticapation. Please hurry
and update, I just can't wait.
Your newly divoted fan,
DitzyAssassien
A part has me confused though? MMM....what happened
to her in the museum, when the shikkon stared to
shine? I'm teribley confused. It would be nice if
you told me what happened? ^_^ Oh wells
I love it. There's always a twist that leaves you
leaning out of your seat in anticapation. Please hurry
and update, I just can't wait.
Your newly divoted fan,
DitzyAssassien
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story is great, and the plot is just amazing! You made a fine job when writing your chapters, they are accurate and to the point that they leave you breathless.
Update soon, I can't wait to know what will happen of the next chapters! and also what happen to Kagome (in the future).
Update soon!plz.
Update soon, I can't wait to know what will happen of the next chapters! and also what happen to Kagome (in the future).
Update soon!plz.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome job you've done, this is extremely one great masterpiece you came up with. and this ritual, i am curious on what it's all about and where would it lead to. i am looking forward to you next chapter.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was good but somehow out of place. I mean every chapter was written so beautifully, there was so much feeling in them you could actually cut it with a knife. So I felt that words like "cunt" somehow didnt fit well. But it was good so this isnt a flame! I was just...surprised. Shakespeare writing hentai? Groovy.
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... that's all i can say... wow... you tell a powerful story... I am highly impressed... this story... is amazing... please... update as soon as you can... ... .. ... .. wow