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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story...are you ever gonna update? I check back every few days to see if you have. Sorry it took me so long to review...but for some reason when I clicked on review it took me to a blank page. It did that for like months!! But now I can review it. Please please update soon!!!!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love this story I am still of the opinion that only Kagome's stupidity can be blamed. If you are that naive at the age of nineteen, thinking the world is all rainbows and sunshine, then everything that happens is basically your fault. But then I hardly was a child at nineteen, so what do I know about how she should act.
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. Well written. The suspense is wonderful. Sesshoumaru's softness in his youkai phase was very refreshing.
What a shock to see him grow so cold once he was back to himself. Poor Kagome. Her predicament was her own fault simply because
she insisted on taking care of Sesshoumaru. I guess Naraku was correct in accounting for that. Maybe when Sesshoumaru is well, Tensaiga
will obey him and bring Rin back. Hmm, can't remember what happened to the sword. That might be a bit much to hope for, ne? I'll have
to reread some of the chapters. Ah, you know Naraku well and the fact that you have him behind this whole thing is very devious indeed.
I like the way you think. This fic is very intriguing and I so no reason why anyone would not like it.
I am anxious to see the outcome of this fic and hope that you will update it soon.
Snowfall
What a shock to see him grow so cold once he was back to himself. Poor Kagome. Her predicament was her own fault simply because
she insisted on taking care of Sesshoumaru. I guess Naraku was correct in accounting for that. Maybe when Sesshoumaru is well, Tensaiga
will obey him and bring Rin back. Hmm, can't remember what happened to the sword. That might be a bit much to hope for, ne? I'll have
to reread some of the chapters. Ah, you know Naraku well and the fact that you have him behind this whole thing is very devious indeed.
I like the way you think. This fic is very intriguing and I so no reason why anyone would not like it.
I am anxious to see the outcome of this fic and hope that you will update it soon.
Snowfall
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've just re-read this piece for the third(?) time, and had to tell you how much I have enjoyed it, and look forward to the rest of the story. Thank you for the realness of the characters; they have depth and motivation beyond the usual over-reactive stereotypes that others use. Of course, the They MIght be Giants quotes speak to me as well.
Please don't stop - because I don't already know where this story is going.
Please don't stop - because I don't already know where this story is going.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I love this story. Its shrouded in mystery, it has angst and drama, and yet it has a touch of humor in it too....Very nicely done. Very nice. ^_^ I admire your work. PLEASE update soon.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, great story!!!! *squeals* that was really really really good!!! i luved it!!!
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story I must say. I love the way it's written so
professional. I hope to read more. So please update.
professional. I hope to read more. So please update.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay....I'm completely confused and transfixed....my mouth is hanging open and I'm sorta shock....interesting...well....VERY WELL WRITTEN....and well thought out....no idea how you came up with this idea and exacuted it so wonderfully but good job....umm...I don't know what else...to say....just update...and wonderful job....you got me hooked......................yaaaa.....
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the 2nd time i've read it, and still it's breath taking.
You should be proud of your work. It's the best I have seen
so far. It's so beautifuly wirtten. I hope you serve it
justice and continue till the very end. Please do update
soon I just can't wait to read more. I think I'm hooked.
I hope the fowlling chapters well be as great as the ones I have read.
You have a grat talent there with stories, the way you describe
everthing with great deatail. I wish I could write as you do. Ideas
come into my head but, somhow they never reach paper. If
I seem to be priasing you to much, well you deserve it. A great
story such as this the creator should expect priase. Though
please do update. Is there any other website where I could find your
story? My computer seems not to opperate well here. ^_^ If there is please
do tell me i would be geartly thankful.
You should be proud of your work. It's the best I have seen
so far. It's so beautifuly wirtten. I hope you serve it
justice and continue till the very end. Please do update
soon I just can't wait to read more. I think I'm hooked.
I hope the fowlling chapters well be as great as the ones I have read.
You have a grat talent there with stories, the way you describe
everthing with great deatail. I wish I could write as you do. Ideas
come into my head but, somhow they never reach paper. If
I seem to be priasing you to much, well you deserve it. A great
story such as this the creator should expect priase. Though
please do update. Is there any other website where I could find your
story? My computer seems not to opperate well here. ^_^ If there is please
do tell me i would be geartly thankful.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS DIFFERENT HOWEVER IT IS GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK