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i love this story!! and i wanted to thank you for telling me about the paternity thing, now i feel kind of slow lol but thanks and wonderful story. ^_^

Wow...I was really awestruck as I read this fic and I truly envy your eloquence.
The rich descriptiveness and slow pace, at times almost painfully so, makes it come out so realistic.
To not rush things and give in to impatience..I believe that in it self is a great ability.
Development is evenly spread through the chapters flowing like lava; slow, hot and powerful which to me gives the story a very solid feel.
I enjoyed every minute of reading. Thank you for sharing ^_^

I particularily liked the lack of dialogue and the continuing struggle against an unnatural relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. The intimate scenes were also nicely portrayed although I wish that you'd have elaborated slightly more on the ones following the first, lingering a bit in the dark.

But..
All in all I think it's tuly a masterpiece and I deeply wish I too had the amazing gift and ability to describe the world as beautifully as you have.
More than on one occasion my evil self though I should give you my draft kekeke ;). You would easily and undoubtedly turn it in to the kind of story I'm struggling to write. XP

Again, thank you for writing. ^_^

//AkiRen

Hi, I really think you should update this story. I read it a while back and I love it. I would love to know what happens next. Do you plan to update it?

This is an excellent story. Very original and well written. I hope that you plan to write more. Would you mind letting me know if you have abandoned it altogether?

Thanks,

Snowfall

Awesome! I loved it! I love the plot and I so want to know what happens!!! Please update soon!!!!

Ah. You're here too. I almost feel as though I'm stalking you. *rolls eyes* I'm looking forward to finding out what the 'joy' is that came of the events. I hope it's what I think it is. Please update!

Ah come on..update!! I am loving this story so much.

Well, I feel like a little bit of a moron because I didn't know this was here. In my defense however, I didn't know until today that the author panel worked again, not that I've written anything. I've been wondering when someone would mention a character reading fanfic smut. That was very clever. I wish I could see your other reviews while I'm writing this. I agree with the reviewer that appreciates that after the sex, Sesshoumaru and Kagome maintain their original feelings for each other; fear and contempt. I find it unnerving that in so many fictions sex heals all wounds and brings with it enlightenment and some sort of ascension to a higher plane. At least, that has never been my experience. The reverse is more often the reality. A good author can pull off the Disney-esque version, but for others, it's mostly a cop out. Oh, by the way; have I told you how beautifully you write?

For some reason my review attributed itself to Anon, I must have logged out somehow. So. The Anon above is 45cats; just in case I lost it again.