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for The Boyfriend

by Xakana

person chubbers
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why cant i see the story?!?!?!
person chanda
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH the cruelness...*pouting.* Still another wonderful chapter.

I wonder what happened to Kagome? Please dont leave me hanging for long.


Chanda
person pat
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooo the suspence its killing meeeeeee!!!!!
o and can u plz hurry i love this storie plz plz plzupdate soon!!!!!!
person inusailorcardcaptorluver
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW im speechless this si really good i like it its just so awesome i actually cried throughout that whole story please update soon
person kristi
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg dont leave me hanging like that!!!!!!!!
person wj
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed on mm.org but I just thought of something. The police have already seen Inuyasha. When Youkio describes the black-haired boy that attacked him, it will not match Inuyasha's hanyou appearance. Plus, hanyou Inuyasha will heal within a day or two and if the police do go see him again, he will not appear to have been in a fight or cut by glass on the face like Youkio will no doubt tell the police. You are very clever...very, very clever. ^_^
person chubbers
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that took a looong time to update.... hopefully .the next chapter wont take as long, but im still glad your sticking with this stor. i get sooooo annoyed wen people give up in the middle of a story!!!! *grrrr*
person chanda
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I 'm speechless, that chapter kicked ass, Go Inuyasha go...lol
person InuyashaDreamGirl
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMg! THat was good. Yukio diserved to be beatin like that he harmed Kagome 4 life! I think. Well if i ever got raped. I tell you now i would never forget it. Well, Update A.S.A.P!!!

thanks

~Dream Girl
person liz
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! love the beating, loved it loved it loved it.
I just hope Kagome can trust men again, keep the chapters coming.