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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. in chapter 17 you have this really long line ___________________ that goes all the way across the page it makes it so you have to scroll a bit to the left to finish reading the text if you shorten it that would help.
Anyway keep writing this is great story I am glad Inu was able to find Kagome after she was taken I hope her baby is ok. Also glad Inuyasha was able to beat the crap outta that guy for what he did since the police didn't do anything just because they thought it was Kagome's fault. Rather backwards thinking if you ask me. Update soon
Anyway keep writing this is great story I am glad Inu was able to find Kagome after she was taken I hope her baby is ok. Also glad Inuyasha was able to beat the crap outta that guy for what he did since the police didn't do anything just because they thought it was Kagome's fault. Rather backwards thinking if you ask me. Update soon
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well Im glad that she will be feeling in better spirits. What dos'nt kill you makes you stronger... and I really love your insight at the end of each chapter.
Great update,
Chanda
Great update,
Chanda
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee awsome story!!!!! i read all the chappys you have posted in 1 sitting!!! no breaks!!!! cant wait for more!!!! wwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaooooooooooooooooooooo
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good as always! Continue to update! <3
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor girl, she's been through hell and back, and I dont see it getting easier on her due to the fact, that I'm sure this guy is going to get somekind of revenge.
Or what happens when he finds out he sired a child?
Well until the next chapter...
Chanda
Or what happens when he finds out he sired a child?
Well until the next chapter...
Chanda
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor girl, she's been through hell and back, and I dont see it getting easier on her due to the fact, that I'm sure this guy is going to get somekind of revenge.
Or what happens when he finds out he sired a child?
Well until the next chapter...
Chanda
Or what happens when he finds out he sired a child?
Well until the next chapter...
Chanda
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say I have been enjoying your story so far and I can't wait to read the other chapters...*bows down in worship* I definatley have to read your other fanfics soon.
~Jennie~
~Jennie~
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update imediatly woman!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your cliff hangers are driving me up the walls. I love your story, I wouldn't be reading it at 2:43 in the morning if I didn't. The only thing that really bothers me is....WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO KAGOME FOR SEVEN MONTHS?! I mean SERIOUSLY! Who kidnapped her? They had to be demons to be able to overpower Sango Miroku and Kirara. Details woman! DETAILS!
Ceras
Ceras
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man i story gets better and better and longer and longer
love it plz contine soon
love it plz contine soon
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! thats the only way to describe it! Email me back when u come up with the next chapter! BYE!