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My quote: you know a story is good when you feel your only 5 chapters into the story and your actually a lot further. Well that's exactly what I thought when I actually paid attention to what chapter I was on I was about 6 chapters ahead of what I thought I was. It doesn't seem like I had been reading this story for very long, but the look on the computer clock tells me otherwise. Awesome story. Truely moving

uum...man it feels like this ended all so quickly...one minute i'm reading then the next i'm done, but my clock clearly shows it's taken me about an hour and a half to read this whole story...dang I hope you update quick too, I like this story.

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa update now whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

you know I don't review this story enough, and come to think of it, this might even be the first review, but just wanted to say that I'm still loving this story, and keep checking constantly to see if you've updated.

yayyyyyyy more more more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz heehee cant wait till next chapter

Alright this is my first time doing something like this and I don't know if Im doing it right. If reviews are for helping your chapters out

then I might have some useful advise. How about trying to put some more action to this story by making Yukio and Kagome meet

again. Lets say Inu and Kag were walking one day and Inu suddenly sees him. Inu asks to take another route and Kag

wonders why? Since Inu doesn't tell her anything, she insists on going the same route when suddenly she sees him. ( Yukio still

isn't aware that their watching). Kagome starts getting flashbacks and begins to feel ill. Inu grabs her on goes the opposite way. Yukio

turns and watches as they leave thinking" its him again". "This is the moment I've been waiting for". Inu turns to an alley with no

people and checks on Kagome. Suddenly he hears a voice that says " well, well, well, if it isn't my bitch and the fucker who fucked my

head up." Inuyasha turns angrily and says " how dare you show your face around me again" as he stands up. "Whoa" says Yukio. " I

was just trying to say hello to the woman I made sweet, sweet love to". "You bastard" says Inuyasha trying to calm himself down. "

Your lucky I don't want to hurt you in front of Kagome, but if I have to I will." Now you have two choices. You can either walk away

peacefully right now or I'll fuck you up again." Kagome opens her eyes and sees Yukio take a gun out. (Inuyasha obviously doesn't

know what it is).

Well here are some ideas and if I wasn't supposed to comment I'm sorry. I kinda don't know what I'm doing. I hope you can think

about it and if you don't use any of my ideas its cool. I won't be offended. Just trying to help out a little. Well if there are any

questions about me telling you the rest of my ideas or about anything, email me. ( I'm not sure if my email is going to show so if you

don't respond, i wont be offended). I really don't watch that much anime but Inuyasha rocks and so does this story. The best part is

the romance and thats what I look for in animation that I watch. This might of sounded femanine but Im a guy just to clear anything

up. Well thats it, I hope I can get a response and I can't wait to finish reading this story. Keep up the good work and thanks for your

time. (That is if you read my review). By the way this is the best story I've read compared to the other ones. Just telling you to see if

it helps.

Me again. I saw some of the other reviews and realized I messed up bad. My bad. You probably had the whole story planned out and here I was giving you advise. Sorry Im such a lunatic. Well Im still waiting for those other chapters so keep it up.

Here's hoping this might contribute something to the story. Although a miko can be translated to mean a temple virgin, in actual japanese it can also be translated into a a female with spiritual powers who embodies the purity of her heart, soul and body. So in a way Kagome should still have some miko powers to her. If you're wondering how I know this, well I am japanese and do have several members of my family as actual mikos as well as priests.

Lets remember Miroku in theory shouldn't have his spirtual powers either as he isn't pure either. Yet he still has them.

yay an update!