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for The Boyfriend

by Xakana

schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story! I definately can't wait to read more! And, I quite like how it starts to follow the actual story-line, with the pterodactyl like birds getting blood and the last shard in the afterlife place.... so cool, it's like you've re-written the actual story.
Can't wait to read more!
<3
Angel
person Taichi Prime
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whaddaya mean? Takahashi tainted Kagome? How come I don't know this?
Please, reply back and tell me!!!! by the way, love the fanfic!!!!
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there!
just wanted to tell you how in love i am with your story and that i cant wait for the 28th chapter! haha!
but i was just wondering if you could explain something to me.
in your author's note you wrote: "For anyone who wonders, yes, I’m recent with the manga from Japan, so I know Takahashi tainted Kagome, too, hehehe. Is that a great minds thing or just a kooky coincidence?"
what do you mean by this? is it that in the manga from Japan, Kagome is also raped or unpure?
i'de appreciate it if you could clear this up for me.
thanks,
- rin.dee
person Yuta
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this story, but the only thing I don't like it the fact Kagome lost her powers. But, still great structure and plot, you had me going there for a while. Because I thought Yukio was the son of Sesshoumaru. But, over all I really did enjoy reading it, and I hope you continue to keep up the great work.
person Zen
schedule June 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far. The only thing I don't like... is that you throw in the Japanese words and honorifics (is that the right word?) when you are writing in English. It makes those of us that do not know Japanese words a little left out. XD Otherwise, I like it so far.
person Scarlett~
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I cryed, it sooo sad. I'm glad it's lightened up a bit though PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Best Wishes!


Scarlett
person Willow
schedule May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovin your fic, need more.. PLEASE update it soon!!!
person pat
schedule May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow u really have a quite long storie now dont cha
sonds like weekend sucks but u still kept up withe the storie
good job
update soon
person pat
schedule May 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol americans think they wear to much
ha
thats funny
anyway im real glad ur picking up with the storie and r still ,succesfully i might add, writing it
hope it stays that way
contine soon
person Atrea
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! You're a great writer! Please update soon! You rock!