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I like this story very much. But wwhat do you mean "dark"?
Well, I like angst but I hate rape. If you are going to include "Yukio rapes Kags" incident, could you rethink about it?
Anyway, thanks..

I'm really liking this so far, but why didn't they discuss Kikyou during their confessions? I mean Kagome is going to go back to end it with Yukio; Inuyasha gave her the ultimatum "either end it or don't come back". Well, what about him? HE has someone else on the side too and still he barks out this command like he's been nothing but devoted... Then again, this wasn't really about Kikyou or getting revenge for him putting her through so much hurt and pain, so I guess it was okay not to talk about it then. But it really DOES need to be talked about; maybe they can discuss it while he's walking her back to the well. She has reservations about ending things because then she won't have anyone when he leaves her to go to Hell. And how she's had to deal with the hurt of his 'significant other' this whole time...

Yes. Definitely needs to be discussed. So get to writing this next chapter!! I'm dying for more!

omg it is really good i hope that u will be writing the next chapter really soon, It has been extreamly intrastin so far i cant waite for the next one. ^_^ ^_^

hm....well i dont really like this *dark part coming thing* im uneasy *squirm* hehe.... i think yukios gnna do something eh?
must b kag/inu fic and major kikyo bashings!(if shes even in it)
like where the story's heading
update

Huzzah for awesomeness! Example A - this story! Very engaging! the characters feel very honest, and everything feel true and genuine. Keep it up!

cant wait to hear the rest plz cont

WOOOOOT!

I lived for this chap. Well done.

My heart flip flopped when Kagome finally confronted
InuYasha. I loved the things he said to her. GREAT
dialogue.

So my reincarnation guess is way off :snaps fingers:
Dammit! I'm out of guesses, but is he an undercover
youkai? Hmm... Is he a nut? Geez, she has to break
up with him & he's pressuring her for sex...I hope he
doesn't *take* what he wants. Honestly, InuYasha
should be somewhere close by when she tells Yukio.
But then again, she doesn't see him as a threat.

Ungh.

Great stuff though. I'm DYING to see where you take this.

I am so happy they finally hooked up, well written.

Look forward until your next chapter,
Chanda

please update! this story is great and I just can't wait for the next chapter!

I absolutely love this story. I honestly do.
I haven't been on this site for days & when i came,
this is the fic i was seeking. It's brilliant.

I write a LOT of angst & you hit home with yours.
I love Yukio's mysterious ways. I love InuYasha's
reactions (although it was quite heartbreaking).
I especially loved Kagome's little speech at the end.
Every word was true & I'm glad InuYasha heard her.

So now we wait & see if Yash has learned his lesson
and I'm still wondering who Yukio really is. Either
way, you simply must update soon. I'm hooked.

Happy Holidaze ^_^