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for The Boyfriend

by Xakana

person alix
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you didn't have Inuyasha think that Kagome had sex with Yukio because she wanted to. This was a great chapter and it made me sick to see that one officer acting like it was Kagome's fault. I read your a/n: it is too bad about those cases Kagome did'nt take a shower so they have the evidence against him and just because she decided to go out with another guy doesn't make Kagome a tease. She was doing the right thing by breaking up with Yukio first before being with Inuyasha in a serious romantic relationship. And even if Kagome "was" a tease she still said no and told him to stop so it shouldn't matter. Just like saying your are married so your spouse couldn't rape you. If the spouse says no and they are still forced to have sex it is still rape. Now this was a great chapter and even though it hurt to see Kagome afraid I am kind glad you did it that way.... so many other stories have stuff like this happen and then the next day Kagome is fine like nothing happened and alot of time mated to well whoever within a few days... sometimes it is a bit longer but to me it is a bit too much. I also liked how you had Kagome's mom tell them it was Yukio's fault and not Kagome/Inuyasha. I know Inu is going to blame himself for a while because of his promise he feels he failed her but he didn't have any reason to believe she would be in danger in her time. Didn't think she would in danger from someone that had supposedly cared about her. I bet she won't be able to go anywhere without him following for a while. And I see he is worried about what Kagome said about hurting Yukio but I also think Kagome is thinking about the others he may or will hurt so she wants him to stop and get his punishment he deserves. Update soon
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
who's gettin Kagome pregnant
person chadna
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update poor Kags. I liked your A/N and hopes that Inu kicks his a**...

Chanda
person amhor56
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there I loved the lastest chapter. I have noticed that I've never reviewed until now. I apoloigize. Sometimes I'm so hurried for time I barely get time to fully read the chapter or I brisk quicklt through it. I have time. I really like your story and your plot. I haven't quite read a story like yours. I love that you can come up with a unique plot unlike many fic that are very similar. Oh and thanks for the Author's Note, It really is sad that in other countries men can just get awy with about everything without big consequences. And Japan is far more technically advanced that many countries. Yes very sad. I hope you update soon.
person chanda
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I didn' t know that, it's a shame. Great job portraying their emotions.

Chanda
person kat
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great, can't wait for more
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yukio has to be naraku (dont remember how to spell his name) in a diffrent form! thats just my guess..... i loooove the story so far PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEAASSSE update SOON! ^_^
person Liz
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo finally Kag and Inu are together. However, I know you're planning something... you sneaky you.
Keep going, we love it.
person pheonix
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please continue. Also nice way, it is an awesome fic. Update soon.
person M&M
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was awesome! I didn't expect Inuyasha to react this way. Please update soon, cant wait to read the next chapter.