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by Xakana

schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi i've been reading your story and its good. you really captured how a victim dosent really trust males after being attacked. i like your story but im my opion he got off lightly and im not bashing your fic with that but in my opion they deserve very slow torture. is he related to sesshomaru?
person joey
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
glad Inuyasha got his vengence I just hope the police don't question Kagome's mom or anything. Of course it was a good idea for Inuyasha to wait until he was human that way if the police do show up while Inuyasha is there then Inuyasha will have different eyes and hair. Although maybe he shouldn't have said he was Kagome's boyfriend that could come back and bite him in the butt. Hope Kagome can get past her fears I like that you didn't have her just get totally better over nite. I do think she needs to find someone to talk to or maybe Inuyasha needs to let her know that he still wants her to be with him even if they never do "anything" ... that he will stand by her not matter what. And that he doesn't blame her, etc. I know he probably told her but sometimes it needs to be said again and again until Kagome really believes it. Update soon
person pat
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME HE KICKED HIS AS STRAIGHT AAAAAAA YA WOOH WOOH WOOH lol hell ya that kick ass he learn his lesson
oooooo man im so happy right now o man ok plz come up with another chapter plz i need more to read
P.S. THAT WAS AWSOME HAHA ok im done O GOD WAAAAAAAA HA HA HA HA LOL
person anonymous
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Hurry and make new ones becuase I am far too anxious for it to be healthy
person Kagome nita gawa
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
pk fine i'll get back on and see if theres more chappies later.
btw. great story.
love your writing style



love your #1 fan,
Kagome Nita gawa
person Kagome nita gawa
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
K last time I tried to write in japanese aff wouldn't let me so i give up.
anywho.
everyonr thinks my names funny
cause it's Kagome like from the anime,
but I really don't care what they think,
I love my name.


love,
kagome nita gawa
person chanda
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats so sad that the cops didnt believe her and I hope Inuyasha beats the crap out of him soon.

Update soon
Chanda
person pat
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaagggghhhhhh come on hurry i want to read more plz contine
person pat
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaagggghhhhhh come on hurry i want to read more plz contine
person InyshChck
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was asume! We both love it! We would like u to tell us when ur next chapter is comming out. And we would like to hear every detail of when Inuyasha kicks Yukio's ass! Bye!