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i just started reading your story today and i think its great. good story, very consistant, well written and great spellingand grammer(i love storys that have that). im on chapter 29 as i'm writing this, so i dont know if anyone else noticed this, but when i read the part about the light saving kohaku,i noticed the next paragraph suddenly starts with kagome falling and sesshomaru calling her an idiot. just letting you know that. otherwise i love you story ALOT. please write another like it soon.

I've only read up to chapter 3, but I had to say just one thing. This Yukio kid, he's way too charming. In fact, he's so charming, that when I read the dialogue, I imagine him talking with an Italian accent. ROFLMAO. Sorry, just had to put that out. now on to the other 28 chapters.

Okay, now I've read the entire thing. Very amazing, you really are talented, and with such a hectic life. Don't worry about apologizing for not being able to update as often as you might want to. Us addicted readers will just move onto other things while waiting for this one. I'm so happy that it is as long as it is.

I loved how you included that manga chapters in as well, I've been keeping up to date on each weekly update, and I agree with being forever in debt to translators and people who can get the raw scans. I don't know what I would do without them, I'm totally isolated from the anime world without my computer.

Also, backtracking, I liked how you wrote the rape scene. Not that I like rape...just as sensitive an issue it is, I think you did it tastefully and without holding back. I'm trying to write a story with a rape scene also, and I've been torn as to how graphic I should make it. Reading your's, I see now that it shouldn't be a lemon, but it shouldn't take up one paragraph either. I think I will also take your idea about having a link or phone number to the national rape victim hotline. Very good idea, I never thought of that.

Thanks for writing, you brighten lives with your writing as I'm sure you've read. I feel inspired, maybe I will actually make progress with my story, maybe I'll let it stew for another few days haha. anyway, this is long enough. Take care.

this is a really good story. i love it. but i have one question. if tama is born of humans than why did inuyasha question her looking more like him or other less 'attractive' half demons? it was a couple of chapters back. but it just occured to me to ask you that question.

you have quite an amazing fic here, u way of writing is really good, i don't usuallly read angst, but this is awesome, and i found it just by luck, this in not a page that i visit, i dind't even knew that existed.... it was a really weird thing that i found your fic....
anyway you should post it somewhere else, maybe in fanfiction.net, or something more *accesible...*

i'm really enjoying reading
i hope that stupid kid dies, and some sort of happy ending for kagome, she deserves it

I love this!!!! Please update

please update soon! i need to know what happens!

Thank you for the update. Wonderful as always. Can't wait for the next one.

Luv,
Patty

I know this review is late.....I'm only on chap 3 but I just wanted to make a quick comment before continuing. Just to be clear, I LOVE Inu/Kag pairings, I just feel thats the way it should be, but we all know Inuyasha can be very inconsiderate, and it would be nice for Kagome to have someone treat her nicely, and not just in a "You're my woman" kind of way. I like this Yukio character and I think that it would do our beloved dog man some good to have a little competition, after all Kagome does have to put up with Kikyo...

I just found your story and loved every word. But I do have to ask one thing....Will there be a happy ending? If there isn't, I can't finish reading the story. Sounds awful I know, but I'm a sucker for happy endings, no matter how much angst the writer puts me through I will ride it for the promise of a great happy ending. :)

Thanks;
Patty