rate_review Reviews

woow, is really all i can say.
it was soo awesome. i loveall of your stories ! : )

woow, this story is soo good .
i really liked it, because it seemed like something that would really happen,
I honestly read this story, seeing everything happening in my head .
you are a great writer, you truly are.

Screw it not being happy enough, it's nice. Very nice, it wasn't dark or all that long but it has me wanting more, but seriously I find that I'm asking myself; "What is WRONG with you Sesshomaru?" The least he could do was say he didn't want to be with her (Rin) anymore (Were they even together TOGETHER?) instead of just stop showing up, leave a note or a letter or something-geez. My, my, whatever happened to mystery woman? I'd like to know who she is but I'm assuming she's an OC? I like the way how Rin hit him with a damn brick! That was unexpected, I mean you could totally kill the mystery woman but what good would that do? If she survived he'd probably stay with her and despise Rin, not to mention he'd turn her in to the authorities or what-have-you etc. either way if she lived or not. Let this be a lesson, I think. Anyway nicely done.

Your story is sooo good! You're good! :D

I love your story like always.

I thought it was beautiful and I loved it. U wrote it terrificly, I mean I could feel what Rin was feeling or that just maybe b/c I can relate to what happend. Anyway it was one of ur bests. Can't wait to read more on Beautiful Destruction.

Aww :-( that was really good but so sad! I wouldnt doubt that that really did happen in the king and queen time... Well I liked it, although Im not big on angst, I still think it was a brilliant one-shot and good luck on your future works ;-)
moonbabe1989

I liked the story, and Sesshoumaru did deserve what was coming to him!! Hmph! I swear, if I was Rin, I would have freakin make sure he'll never reproduce again!! >,< I don't care, I hope he rots in hell for it too!! Tee hee hee..now I'm being too cruel, but it's okay, because now...it's over for her huh? I guess it's okay..because in the end, she learned the pain of being in love, the beautiful wonderful moments of esctasy, and the bitterness of the jealousy that love gives everyone...yes. She learned...in a harsh way she learned...she learned...T.T