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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule
November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like it so far, you sould do more
schedule
November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Saw the note on your profile and thought I'd use your review board to let you know that you can apply to the problems list and you can get the info you need to get back into your other account.
Apply for membership
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionProblemsList/
or email at
affproblemslist@yahoo.ocm
Two things about your chappie:
*You need a disclaimer
*You could use a beta for punctuation
Sorry if this sounds kinda dry, but I have a really bad cold and feel really miserable. I will say that Sessy is my fave character. He's a god!
Snowfall
Apply for membership
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionProblemsList/
or email at
affproblemslist@yahoo.ocm
Two things about your chappie:
*You need a disclaimer
*You could use a beta for punctuation
Sorry if this sounds kinda dry, but I have a really bad cold and feel really miserable. I will say that Sessy is my fave character. He's a god!
Snowfall