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for Broken Sword

by AlterAlchemist

person Anon
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it but you need to keep going you cant just stop
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Yay, you updated! *claps* I hope to see a chapter 6 soon and...to help ya a bit, rape victims usually don't get over it for a while, so don't have him recover within like weeks. Anyway you're doing great and please update soon ^^
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
person Tsukiyomi
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is coming along so far. I can't wait to read the lemon with Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru.
person Psycho Demon-Witch
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
person monkeygirl
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm... Sesshoumaru is so wimpy cool.
can't wait til the next chapter
person CrimsonInHumanBloodForever
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I think it's going way to fast. You should slow down and do more disctiptions. Sounds kinda like someone just telling me this in shorter terms. I think you should try to discribe what happened and everything... but other wise it could get a lil better. I like it, but I feel as though it could be better.
person Kiara
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just read chapter 3 and 4 and loved them. The second part of chapter 4 was really funny! Chapter 3 was really sad but Inuyasha's reaction aften the discovery was sweet, I loved how you described his blood thirty reaction. However, could you please make the chapters longer, they are so short but the plot is great nonetheless. And please update soon and often. I am dieing to read the next chapters!
person (^_^)
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AB-SO-LU-TE-LY LOVE your fic!!! PLZ update soon!!!!
person PrincessSesshyMaru
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is so kewl. I mean aside from Sesshomaru being raped *sniff*. Actually I like it and its dramtic. Update soon PLEASE!?!