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June 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved t so update please asap n please tell me when u do
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay... That was freaking hot!!
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very yummy.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i had a hard time getting into this story - you should try to get out of putting author notes in the middle of your story. comments are distracting. another thing was that INuyasha was alittle too knowledgable about everything, and his older brother was too soft and caring. maybe its just my prefrence for a more cold protrayal of the elder brother....
On the plus side - your discriptions were awsome
On the plus side - your discriptions were awsome
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. I hope you end up finishing this. Wow, that was a lot of cum. :)
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that got me off so badly write the next chapter soon please ^_^
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it was pretty good, but I think you made Inuyasha too young and kept emphasizing how young he was. That was a bit disturbing.
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November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Squeee! That was awesome! ^_^ Yoku dekimashita. Too cool! I loved it. Especially when Sesshoumaru started to get rougher and more violent. Mmm... tasty. XD
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey You!!!! Oh man I loved this story. Thing that bothers me a bit is like Inu and Sess ages. But oh well. Still though it was cute and hott. Now that I think of it, I don't really mind the ages. Write another story soon!!!!