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HEY I'M KAREN AND I REALLY LIKE THIS FICTION AND THAT WHY I'M ASKING YOU ARE YOU UPDATING BECAUSE IT BEEN A WHILE . PLEASE I REALLY WANT YOU TO UPDATED ALREADY.
THANK YOU,
KAREN

*grins* Why thank you for updating, much appreciated! I loved it! Will it be a Kuwabara/Keiko---*snickers* how amusing...Anyway---keep up the good work. I know how it feels, I've had to upload chapters multiple times after fixing the formating problems to make it come out right. Have no idea whats wrong to be quite frank. As for the seperation of Youko and Kurama...that's really up to you. But in order to develop their 'relationship' I suppose it would be easier to write. One question will there be any, um...explicit action between the guys?---Unfortunately, I haven't yet come up with the fourth chapter of COK, but It's coming along slowly, I've lost count of the times I rewrote it already. *shakes head* I'm not very happy with how it's going but hopefully it will be satisfactory for the time being. Anyway, hope to read more updates soon!

~Kage

Love the chapter, it was a nice touch with how close you have made them. I love the relationships they seemed to have built involving each other. Yusuke needs friends like that to keep him together. And Kuwa will be taken care of now as well especially with Keiko around. I'm curious where exactly Yusuke is being taken. Perhaps an alternate dimension of sorts. Guess I'll have to wait and find out. As for your question. You know, I like these little polls that you put at the end of the chapters. Gives me a chance to think through my preferences and figure out why exactly I have them. Back to the question, I say go for it if you want to separate them. You are one of the few author's that has been able to do so and pull it off believably. If you did we'd get to drool over the both of them at the same time. It'd be interesting to see how everyone would interact if they were apart. Soooo if you have an idea, run with it. I'll back you 100% Can't wait to see how you do this. Update soon please

i love how the guys aren't afraid to show they care for each others feelings. i would love for youko and kurama to seperate, most stories that do that are great. please update again soon.

Very good break up, I want to see how Keiko takes it...She could react in so many ways...I think it's better for relationships to end peacefully rather then loudly and violent, of course, those are lots of fun, but lots of pain too. You rarely get over it, because then when you see them again, it brings back a turrent of emotions, a lot of them angry. Anyway, good chapter! Can't wait for the next chappie!

I just realized I hadn't reviewed since your first chapter and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed the interaction between Kurama/Yusuke/Kuronue. Like the two older demons are teaching Yusuke to be a demon. The breakup was well done. I like how you made the characters as they were portrayed at the end of the series. Yusuke more mature and responsible. Keiko was almost the same at the end of the series as the beginning. I can see why she'd be the insecure one in the relationship. I'm looking forward to seeing her side of the breakup in the next chapter. I have questions about the character Ko-rei but expect that you'll be giving me my answers in upcoming chapters.

As far as your question--I prefer Kurama. He was much more multifaceted, sweet and innocent or cruel and mercifless. He could be just about anything.

Looking forward to your update.

Another great chapter. You were right it was too short. I like both Kurama and Yoko and I quess it depends on how it is written which I like best. I love the fics where Yoko is playful one minute and ready to rip someones throat out the next. As for Kurama I like his patients, but I have never read a fic where he was cold blooded. It may be interesting to read. Is Kurama going to have any moments in your fic where he is that cold?

I'm really enjoying reading this & am looking forward to the next chapter. I did notice a bit of a goof at the beginning of chapter 4 though, you mention a room several times when in the other chapters they're on a street corner. You said that Yusuke looked around the room at his friends & a bit down from there they're on the street corner again. I hope this helps.

i love how yusuke is very calm about his feelings about keiko. i never liked keiko very much i think she is a controling bitch. yusuke deserves so much better and he is finally realizing it. i have nothing against male/male fluff. in well written cases i quite enjoy it. please update again soon.

Hi, I loved your update, in regards to your question I like Kurama better. I can't wait for your next chapter, you are doing a great job with the imagery in your story.