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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked how you had him tell her he loved her..
so many people make it unrealistic.. and that bothers the HELL out of me. you should probably edit this further though, make it a bit clearer and add a bit more imagery, you have a good thing going/
so many people make it unrealistic.. and that bothers the HELL out of me. you should probably edit this further though, make it a bit clearer and add a bit more imagery, you have a good thing going/
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"AN: This was caused by boredom."
you should be bored more often ^_^
you should be bored more often ^_^
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet And really intense it just kinda sucks that thats all there is 2 it
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November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey that was a great story. inu ad kagome were played out about perfectly and the raman part was a great touch ^_^ u should continue this story!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am honored to know that i am the first reviewer!!! yaya!
it was getting really fluffy in the beginnning which is what every inu/kag fic should at least have.
it was also a little dark and scary at first but then calmed down.....then there was the lemon!!!
good show and good setup. (clap clap)
it was getting really fluffy in the beginnning which is what every inu/kag fic should at least have.
it was also a little dark and scary at first but then calmed down.....then there was the lemon!!!
good show and good setup. (clap clap)
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one more itsy bitsy thing. the icon next to your name is really pretty, where did you get it and what is it a part of?
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much. the fic was a bit of a pain to write. The icon is from here. its called sexy 4 icon. I really don't know where the pic is from.