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for Temptation High

by uteyeshadow

person Lill
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHA! That was cool!


Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person sqeeky1990me
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOO
person Flor
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AY wats up? i really like da story an cant wait 4 da next chapter it was kindov confusion in da last chapter but i get it now well i gadda go kk keep up da good work! ( ^o^ )
choa!!
person Nicole
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story(and no im not saying that cause im scared of u) Cause u REALLY had me VERY CONFUSED 4 a while there buut ya all in all i like ur story
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's good... reallly good. I'd like to see the lemon XD and well, I was kinda sad when you killed Inuyasha, but it does work out now... I mean... ok whatever, just... POST THE LEMON!
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this story!! I can't wait till you update it. The twist in it was unexpected but really spiced up the story!
person inuyashasmate
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE ASAP OR YOU CAN DO IT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
person neko-yasha
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the last reviewer i would have had to send you some hate mail too if Inuyasha and Kagome hadn't gotten back together. Oh and great job killing Kikyou in the first dimension (AWESOME) I hope that she died in the other dimension too (Cool if Inuyasha killed her he he). Can't wait for the next part. This ones going on the favorites list. Thanks for you hard work and dedication blah blah blah. Please don't leave us hanging.
ps. screw whoever stole your story that sucks.
person DeronsDemonGurl
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story. If you hadn't brought kagome + Inuyasha back toghether I would have had to send you some hate mail. But you did so don't worry about it. I can't wait until you update. The story is still great, and I am sure it will continue to be great. I will read later. Peace. X D!!!!
P.S. you should bring kag/inu and mir/san toghether in the second dimension.(just a suggestion...that I would absolutely love.)
person InyshChck
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, 1 that was a really good story, all u have to do now is finnish it, and if u need help to figure out what to do next. Than go make Kagome and Sango kick Miroku and Inuyasha's ass's to begin with. Then make Kagome see this new Inuyasha and for the new Kagome to be seen by this new Inuyasha. Then rap it up! 2. Never ever say the word father in front of me again or i will kick ur ass! I have just lost my father, and i would not like to be reminded of it. 3. If that girl thinks that way than the hell with her! Til ur next chap.!