rate_review Reviews

cool story but i got to ask whats with Naraku 1st he is giving her hugs like a five yr old with a teddy bear (weird), and then he is trying to break her and 2nd would Ayame realy break the fast in a srtory.
but that aside over all a great story plz tell me it not the end

Ok, this was a good story, very graphic I feel sorry for Ayame. Are you going to add something else to this story or are we left to our own conclusions? You have something going here so people will want to read if Ayame gets help from Kouga or someone else that will treat her right, or does Naraku really like her and wants her to be his mate? See, there are questions that need answering and only you the writer can do that since this is your story.

Please continue This paring is very good, Please