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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I am absolutely amazed. It was weired, but not neccessarily in a psychotic way. And I realize that, the underlying messege, whether it was meant to be there or not, was true. I can't really describe it so I won't even try. But anywho, I love it. It wasn't haapy ending, nor a tragic one (oddly enough), it just was an ending. Am I making enough nonsense? :)
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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that was relly weird. Sorry to say it but I think it was relly bad. I did not gat the pount. How did they diy?
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting, I liked it alot!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that was really good! *wipes away a tear* beautiful!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intense....different....i liked it :))
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad....but it was different and I liked it very much.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ummm, wow... not what I was expecting... mmm.... I really dont know how to review this one.... The title definitely fits though ^^'
I am confused to say the least. I didn't understand why Sesshoumaru was there... I got why Kagome was sad... and I ot the part about him being sad about the death of Rin.... is that why he was there? Huh... god, you probably explained it.... lol Im probably asking the most stupid questions.... lol
Well... anyways... this was an interesting fic. I'd give it a 8/10 (8 out of 10) ^.~ Ja-ne!
~Amanda-chan
I am confused to say the least. I didn't understand why Sesshoumaru was there... I got why Kagome was sad... and I ot the part about him being sad about the death of Rin.... is that why he was there? Huh... god, you probably explained it.... lol Im probably asking the most stupid questions.... lol
Well... anyways... this was an interesting fic. I'd give it a 8/10 (8 out of 10) ^.~ Ja-ne!
~Amanda-chan
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Psychotic...
and GLORIOUS.
First, I'm a sucker for the revolving device of using the first few lines of a story for the last few as well. Big, big fan, especially if it's done seemlessly, and if it takes the meaning from the first read and expands it into something immediately more profound. You've got it here, my dear. You abso-freakin'-lutely nailed it.
Second, this idea is so beyond left field, that I think my heart spasmed in unabashed glee simply because your concept is so *new*. Who writes anything new anymore?!?! Nobody, but you, apparently!!! Seriously, I was...uh...blown away (mentally of course, unless the mega-tsumani from across the pacific is on it's way into the other oceans, in which case, suck! I thought this was fiction!) by the...uh...magnitude of originality. Yeah, yeah, we've all seen 'Armageddon' (sp?) but who in their wildest dreams thought to pair 'comet-disaster' with 'Inuyasha'??? Nobody, but you!!! I'm in awe for it.
Lastly, but certainly not least...ly...your writing talent made the concept and the emotion cohesive and urgent. I don't know if there are many other authors who could've made something this audacious work. As I was just listening to Rage Against the Machine, I would like to gift you with the title 'Renegade of SxK Fanfiction'. You are truly one out to change the world, at least, our SxK world.
Oh wait, one more random thing: Your title makes my heart go pitter-pat. You definitely get those double entendres, don't you? It fits your concept frighteningly well, but gives absolutely nothing away about the concept. It's only in retrospect that one can look at it and go 'a-HA!!!'. I adore 'a-HA!!!' moments.
And frankly, if I haven't gabbed about it enough, I utterly adore this fic. Please write more. My similar literary style and inner-appreciation for eccentric ideas demands it!!!!!
and GLORIOUS.
First, I'm a sucker for the revolving device of using the first few lines of a story for the last few as well. Big, big fan, especially if it's done seemlessly, and if it takes the meaning from the first read and expands it into something immediately more profound. You've got it here, my dear. You abso-freakin'-lutely nailed it.
Second, this idea is so beyond left field, that I think my heart spasmed in unabashed glee simply because your concept is so *new*. Who writes anything new anymore?!?! Nobody, but you, apparently!!! Seriously, I was...uh...blown away (mentally of course, unless the mega-tsumani from across the pacific is on it's way into the other oceans, in which case, suck! I thought this was fiction!) by the...uh...magnitude of originality. Yeah, yeah, we've all seen 'Armageddon' (sp?) but who in their wildest dreams thought to pair 'comet-disaster' with 'Inuyasha'??? Nobody, but you!!! I'm in awe for it.
Lastly, but certainly not least...ly...your writing talent made the concept and the emotion cohesive and urgent. I don't know if there are many other authors who could've made something this audacious work. As I was just listening to Rage Against the Machine, I would like to gift you with the title 'Renegade of SxK Fanfiction'. You are truly one out to change the world, at least, our SxK world.
Oh wait, one more random thing: Your title makes my heart go pitter-pat. You definitely get those double entendres, don't you? It fits your concept frighteningly well, but gives absolutely nothing away about the concept. It's only in retrospect that one can look at it and go 'a-HA!!!'. I adore 'a-HA!!!' moments.
And frankly, if I haven't gabbed about it enough, I utterly adore this fic. Please write more. My similar literary style and inner-appreciation for eccentric ideas demands it!!!!!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I understand it a little better now after I re-read it.... ^^ But still why and how sess is there, throws me off!!!! <33333 XD