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August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!! That was such a sweet story. Do you have any plans to continue it or leave it as a one shot?
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, I Like it!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG,OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG.. I love it. I can't belive it they waited for her 500 YEARS and they still love her!!!!!
I love the story no really I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. You should make a sequel. Please???
D.P.
I love the story no really I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. You should make a sequel. Please???
D.P.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a great one-shot. Are you planning to write anymore or leave it as is?
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When you wrote this story, did you WANT Sesshoumaru to be OOC? I'm sorry, but I got to the point where Sesshoumaru said he 'loved' Kagome and had to stop. Sesshoumaru will never ever ever fall in love with a human, and if he ever DID, he would never admit it. Humans digust Sesshoumaru and Inu Yasha disgusts him even more, so the idea of Sesshoumaru just coming out and nearly whining that he loves Kagome is sickening.
You might want to put "OOC" on the description of your story because like this, I find your depiction of Sesshoumaru offensive. He is not some tame dog that will follow around at someone's heels. He's the Lord of the Western Lands, Son of Inu no Taisho, Suigimi, Lord of Demons. One word. ROYALTY. Maybe you should do some research on his character before you write another story like this.
You might want to put "OOC" on the description of your story because like this, I find your depiction of Sesshoumaru offensive. He is not some tame dog that will follow around at someone's heels. He's the Lord of the Western Lands, Son of Inu no Taisho, Suigimi, Lord of Demons. One word. ROYALTY. Maybe you should do some research on his character before you write another story like this.