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for A World We Never Made

by goldenjade5

person lara5170
schedule November 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was very different. I wish I knew what the powers that Kagome has that are developing that they were talking about in the 1st chapter...the ones that Sessh & the other lords discussed & the reason Sessh showed up in the beginning. What I don't like or understand is when Sessh & Kagome 1st arrived in this place they were surrounded by male warriors with no soul or mind. All the warriors were male & empty,but being controlled. What if they did this process to them & thats how they ended up like that?? I also don't think I'd like the idea of Sessh having sex with all these other females but if it's going to be Kagome arousing him & the servants collecting his cum afterward then...I don't know. Interesting theory but I think this story was dropped & abandoned in 2005. Am I right?
person fluffylover1978
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I JUST MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, EVERYTHING JUST KEEPS YOU ON THE EDGE OF YOUR SEAT AND GASPING FOR MORE. PLEASE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!
person Subaru
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay......this is an odd story. What normal person would just feel alright and comfortable being in a room having sex and than having the room change like in a sci-fi movie? They must be high. But this is a good story, I want to see how it ends!
person $angelica$
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is my favorite.You do not now how long i've waited for a new chapter.I also like you other stories.Like click and flash that was my most favorite one ever.I hope you add more chapter to your stories.Keep up the work your doing great.*




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