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the first is kikyou obviously

the second is inuyasha and the third is sango... very good writing though

i really liked them. they were so sad

Very sweet. It's good to see a bit of self-expression amidst the smut and debauchery lol. I personally think there is nothing better to defines ones character a notch above the rest, than their ability to write poetry. Be proud.

Wows... big wows... Oh my sweetpea... I so very much loved this one... As in poem number 3 about my favourite muse. I truly adore Sango. And I truly adore this poem babe. I know this is going to sound insane, but several lines of this poem I could relate distinctly to myself. Seeing it put forth at the hands of another has just left my head spinning. I've dabbled in writing bits of prose here and there (usually when I either completely at the end of my tether with life and it's fucked up circumstances or because I've ingested to many harmful substances that have opened up my creative side), and have actually written a depressing little poem containing a line so very similar to one I found in your poem about my favourite taijiya that I had to do a double take. So on a personal level... freaking brilliant sweetpea... On a fanfic fans level... Awesome....

You blow my mind with your sweet little odes sweetpea...

Peace...

The Sinner

*sighs wistfully... dreamy, starry look in my big, blue eyes....* Sweet. Oh course it was Kikyo and Inuyasha. I particularly like the second poem... What a terribly deep person you seem to be R3tribution.... Interesting...

I really liked this. The title fits this really well. So sad and tragic what happened!

This is good. You should do another chapter.