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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I love this story. I hate to do this but I'm going to be fawning for a minute here (I usually don't go into raptures for people.) I'm really enjoying your storyline but the thing that impresses me the most is that you don't have a clear direction for this story yet but the chapters flow so well into one another. I don't know, maybe I've just read too much bad fanfiction with horrid grammar and spelling, so kudos to you for not having those problems. I'm getting off topic here, the main point is that you're story kicks ass and I can't wait for your next update!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic! Please update it soon!
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! I hope you continue. I like how you're represented Sesshomaru - very honest :).
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UR STORY IS GREAT!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..:::+I like it update soon+:::..
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, keep going. Finally a fic where Sesshoumaru is not as much OOC or fell in love with Kagome within two minutes. Or always the same plot like Kagome sees Inu with Kikyou and runs into the waiting arms of Sess *snort*, as if that ever would happen. Most authors seem to forget that Kikyous body is made of clay, to be blunt, she would brake into many pieces if he would stick his dick into her. Just one suggestion don´t rush anything just because some brainless fools want to see some lemons already in the second or third chapter. One more thing, Sesshoumaru is cold, ruthless, possesive and will always appear emotionless. I doubt that he will ever say to a women that he loves her even if he really does.
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Such a great story you have here. I really like how you're portraying Sesshoumaru. He's still his aristocratic and uptight self. I can't wait for the next chapter of your fic. Hope you update soon!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its a very good story and I think you did very well on it. It would make sense that sesshoumaru would think that humans smell. *mumbles.* Would also make sense that sesshoumaru wouldnt think he doesnt smell a little...What pure demons dont have sweat glands? O.o nm I seen pleanty of fanfics where he is working up a sweat. *Cough.* O.o;; Ok nm about that, could you write me to let me know of any future updates? Thanks in advance.