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Wow this was a great story I am sorry to see it end. You did such a wonderful job. Congrats on the award. I will be reading this story over again several times I really enjoyed it.

WOW!!!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!!!! Kudos!! That was yet another great chapter!! Thank you!!! Bows to the goddess of Literature!! You totally rock, Goddess!! I loved it when Inuyasha took Kagome to Yoyogi Park- though when I first read it I mixed it up bad - and thought yellowstone National Park and Yogi bear. LOL!! silly me. I thought it was sweet with the hamburger and Inuyasha curbing his urge to wipe off Kagome's chin. It soo would have ruined his tough guy image.. lol... And for the Keyboard.. nice touch!! That was great!!! i had often wondered about it....I wonder if someone will make a Youkai friendly keyboard available for Youkai only of course.. Only through youkai connections... And the bit about Kagome's body changing... Do women's bodies really change after having a baby?!! If so... Oh... my..... bigger breasts.... passses out... from shock... And how Inuyasha's first assignment as being called a 'field trip'!! CUTE!! Sesshoumaru and his humour again. Nice touch!!My thoughts on the bodyguard.. Kiyama... what a overconfident loser!! WHOOT!!! To Inuyasha for taking him down!! He didn't even break a sweat!! Poor Inuyasha.. He needs a sparring partner. And again you have made another hot I mean HOT!!! adorable, Romantic, playful, amd Steamy love scene!!! I absolutely love the scenes with all four of our favourite, HOT and Delicious characters get together.... Hmm I wonder if Kagome and Kichou will arouse each other to drive their mates completely around the bend and completely wild. Is that not what alot of men secretly have fantasy about? Their beloved female with another making out? At least that is what I have heard from several of my male friends. Hmmmm... Actually I think it might backfire and actually cause both Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru to go into a pleasure induced coma for a week..... or more......Thank you and THANK YOU for the chapter. I really enjoyed it very much. I am soooo pleased and honoured to be able to read your story.. Again thank you for sharing your story with us and allowing us to read it... I have my fingers crossed for your story in the awards... Please keep up the most excellent work... and Again... Thank you... ROCK ON!!!!!

wow another chapy im soo happy. its sad that the catogory was trown out because of some underage. but not to worry your fans are still here with you. i happy that Kichou is not an jealous person, and that she lets her mate help inu and kag. inu is so understanding. im enjoying it so far keep up the good work.

Once again, beautifully done! The shopping trip was great--how I wish I could do that, just once! I was a little confused when the name of the client on the security "field trip" changed from Morishita to Matsuki about halfway through the section, but I think that was probably just a sort of running typo. As always, the lemon was steaming! I can't imagine where you might be going with this next, as everything seems to be just about perfect as it is! In any case, I can hardly wait to find out!

Wow, Kichou is pregnant again.....how many pups will she give birth?

Neat chapter. Inuyasha is so sweet taking Kagome out. He knew she needed to get out of the house. My hubby is the same way even if it is just a small little trip to the store or to get a cup of coffee/cocoa he knows ya just need to get out sometimes. Anyway I just love how he watches out for Kagome I was wondering if they had guards... well you answered my question in this chapter. It is cool that Inuyasha is learning new things in this time too... and it is cool that Kagome is ok with him doing that. Thx for posting

Super cute. Stupid snake demon. LOL. Man I loved this chapter it was just nicely paced and wordly so well sweetly. I love the fact that Grandpa and Inuyasha had that little heart to heart too. Man you're a great writer.

i just love the pups and the family history of birthmarks. just genius. i enjoy this story so much.

I really love your story. I am laughing about Inuyasha´s crest XD. Thanks for updating so soon. You are great.

You are just amazing! Wow! This is THE best fic i have EVER read! Keep writing! :)